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trieze0713

Past, Present & Future, Chapter 15

Sep 16, 2011 15:11

Chapter 15: Starting Over

His head felt heavy; he wanted to open his eyes but his mind wanted them to remain closed. He felt like his body was being buried under a huge stone. Painful… it’s hard to breathe… He doesn’t want to breathe, he wants to die. No one wants him, no one needs him, he’s a lonely soul.

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past present & future, fanfic, yunjae

Comments 36

ext_640030 September 16 2011, 18:18:57 UTC

yipeee!! update!!! can't wait for the next chappie..tnx

trieze0713 September 19 2011, 03:00:41 UTC

Ouch! You ask me for an update already? LOL Trying here ;) Thanks!

chloe1910 September 16 2011, 18:50:45 UTC

Poor Jaejoong. I do know that he borught upon himself most of what happened to him, but I mostly blame his parents. He was selfish because his mom & dad never teach & educate him properly. His mom is too scare to do anything while his dad will just beat him to submission.

The one person he loves and dare to oppose his father for, "betray" him for money. Of course he didn't know the actual story about the cheque and at that time, he was too childish and was unhappy with Yunho's attention towards little Moonbin, sigh.

I'm glad his mom is also finally standing up for herself against Jae and is determine to be there for Jae. Fighting Mama Kim. The warm hand that soothed Jae just before he fall asleep is his mom right?

I really love Yunho-Moonbin's father-son relationship♥♥♥Moonbin is such a clever and sneaky kid, heh.

trieze0713 September 19 2011, 03:08:34 UTC

Yes dear, it was Mama Kim's hands :) Our Jae needs some TLC badly now.

Moonbin is sneaky indeed! He just wants to have a complete family hahaha
Thanks for still reading it, appreciate so much. Happy :)

crystaldee September 16 2011, 20:17:44 UTC

Now that left is for my JJ to recover and be happy again....
Everyone in here who's hating JJ might be forgotten about the scene where JJ saw Yun accepting the cheque from Jae's dad and that what made JJ left Yun. He thought that Yun wanted to leave him and because he felt that Yun love baby Bin more than him....well, yeah you get my drift, right Triez?
Kekekekkeke....

Love you bb cuz you update this chapter faster than usual...hehhhehee...
Can't wait for the next part...
I hope you can surprise us again..^___^

trieze0713 September 19 2011, 03:12:03 UTC

Oh yeah! YunJae needs some loving soon! And it's coming! Woohoo \(^o^)/
People tend to forget the most important thing when they don't get what they want hahaha

Hhhm, it's killing me to create another surprise but yeah, I'll try! LOL Thanks darling!

n3uromanc3r September 16 2011, 21:10:37 UTC

So that's what happened! The father-son talk and bonding was so heart-warming, I'm so happy for them!
I liked how Moonbin talked about Jae and felt the need to defend him. I can't wait for the meeting between Yunho and Jae.

And it's so good that Jae's mother finally apologized!

trieze0713 September 19 2011, 03:14:03 UTC

I'm glad that you're happy for Yunho & Moonbin :)
Moonbin wants to have a complete family, I think... especially with a possibility of having a grandmother now? *wink*

Mama Kim has come to see the light after meeting Moonbin ROFL

Thanks for reading and still commenting! *hugs*

jadeing September 17 2011, 03:45:44 UTC

I feel bad for Jaejoong. Hope the misunderstanding gets cleared up soon and Jae and Yunho reunites.

trieze0713 September 19 2011, 03:15:53 UTC

Of course, misunderstanding must be cleared soon. I long for some YunJae loving, myself LOL
Thanks for reading bb!