That was a good read. I was a bit worried at first when I read the whole AU premise but I gave it a shot and I'm glad I did. The cameos from the different characters were great and really added to the experience of dorm life at the training school.
I also liked watching Oshitari grow and crave for something/someone for more than just pleasure or passing fancies.
The ending with the flashback to the written exams was a cute way to close the fic, even if I did want to know how Yuushi's father would handle Yuushi's decisions and if the three of them would be able to stay together through different assignments. But I suppose after 35000 words I shouldn't complain.
It's just too sad that they had to cut their hair. But Atobe in a police uniform made up for it.
Ah yes, XDD cutting their hair seemed a little mean, but I couldn't imagine it otherwise - no way would I let a guy with hair covering his eyes near a gun! XDD And mm *___* I like police uniforms, so it seemed kind of logical to put those three in them. :D; I'm sure they'd have found good uses for all their various bits of uniform and gear.
I also liked watching Oshitari grow and crave for something/someone for more than just pleasure or passing fancies. ← Thank you ^^ In a way, that was what I wanted out of this fic. :> I wanted to show a change in the way he thought and how it affected the people around him, so I'm glad you picked up on it.
I just feel like it's a real shame this fic only has one comment so far, because I'm sure Anj would have really loved it. I'm not finished yet (I imagine other readers are just taking their time as well, since it's a long one), but I wanted to drop in and say that so far it seems really fantastic. <3 Unfortunately, it's that time of the year that's really hard to find free time, I feel.
She liked the dark stuff, so yeah, I think she would have enjoyed this. :) And it's got a happy enough ending that it's not, y'know, MISERABLE, either. :D
Finally got a chance to finish reading this, and it really was a great fic. I loved the dynamic of the three of them here, the way they had to so slowly work up to fitting together, first with Oshitari and Shishido and then with Atobe as well. I also enjoyed a lot of the little details, like Momo and Kaidoh and Oishi and all the other students. The sex was hot, the writing was very well-done, and you pulled off a pretty tough AU premise with a lot of grace. Really nice work, anon! ♥
^___^ I'm happy you picked up on the 'slowly' part. Though it probably was hard to miss. XDD I think that's very much what I wanted to portray - that it was a changing of their ways of thinking that finally allowed the three of them to get together. ^__^
I can appreciate stuff that builds slowly but steadily. It's kind of refreshing compared to the general too-hot-too-fast sort of fic. (Not that I don't also like that kind, mind you.) :)
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I also liked watching Oshitari grow and crave for something/someone for more than just pleasure or passing fancies.
The ending with the flashback to the written exams was a cute way to close the fic, even if I did want to know how Yuushi's father would handle Yuushi's decisions and if the three of them would be able to stay together through different assignments. But I suppose after 35000 words I shouldn't complain.
It's just too sad that they had to cut their hair. But Atobe in a police uniform made up for it.
Overall a good read.
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Ah yes, XDD cutting their hair seemed a little mean, but I couldn't imagine it otherwise - no way would I let a guy with hair covering his eyes near a gun! XDD And mm *___* I like police uniforms, so it seemed kind of logical to put those three in them. :D; I'm sure they'd have found good uses for all their various bits of uniform and gear.
I also liked watching Oshitari grow and crave for something/someone for more than just pleasure or passing fancies. ← Thank you ^^ In a way, that was what I wanted out of this fic. :> I wanted to show a change in the way he thought and how it affected the people around him, so I'm glad you picked up on it.
Thanks for reading and commenting. :3
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a lot of grace ← That made me happy. ♥
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