On Knots and Unravelling - Part Four

Apr 10, 2011 17:27


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liev April 10 2011, 19:18:02 UTC
I very much like where this is going, just so you know ;) Emily and Naomi are surprisingly adorable together (not that I wasn't expecting to love them, but they are so awkward and sweet around each other, which is unlike the stick Naomi had up her arse for most of the series). It's funny that Naomi apparently didn't much care for Emily in the past, and vice versa, and suddenly there are hormones and feelings and jealousy and I can't fathom how strange that must be for someone like Naomi, who's not fond of dealing with unexpected turns of events at all ( ... )

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liev April 10 2011, 19:19:32 UTC

‘Well, yes, but you still shouldn’t have invited her. It’s all right for you, you don’t know how fucking weird it is to have a girl follow you around.’ Emily’s face seems to close off a touch at her words, until there’s all this distance between them that wasn’t there a moment ago, that Naomi’s created, somehow.

Oh Naomi, you sure have a way with words. This, along with her avoidant tendencies, might just be one of the reasons why Emily doesn't catch her pining. I'm sure she'll have to endure one or two chapters full of quiet anguish just for this comment.

‘Emily!’ So many words. Naomi steadies herself on a plant pot, before launching herself into the blue. ‘You should know, that you’re really nice, and even though I’m not you should probably still like me.’

Really, someone has to shop Naomi's face onto a puppy. She's been unintentionally gawky and adorable throughout this chapter, and although her argument is seriously flawed, it just makes me want to hug her.

In another part of the universe, Katie walks in, is asking something ( ... )

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triptohere April 11 2011, 17:43:31 UTC
Oh, lord. This comment makes me blush, ngl, because I rarely feel like I'm writing anything worth detailed discussion. Thank you, I'm flattered ( ... )

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ceinwyn87 April 10 2011, 21:25:09 UTC
When Emily talked about Panda's sleepover I was so excited (3x04 is one of my fave ep and atm this is one of my fave fic fyi) and I was eagerly waiting for the bouncy castle scene......... but damn! you HAD to make it a Sophia/Emily moment! :D I want you to know that my shipper heart is bleeding.... profusely ( ... )

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triptohere April 11 2011, 17:53:25 UTC
Oh, 3x04 is my absolute favourite ep tbh, especially the first half. The entire thing is so delightfully quirky, so I really enjoy writing about some of the events. Sorry about the Sophia/Emily, but nothing is straight-forward :)

Honestly, Naomi is so bad at self improvement. She continues to fuck up, I'm afraid.

Soon! More soon. Thanks for stopping by :)

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triptohere April 11 2011, 18:02:27 UTC
Lol, Sophia does get in Naomi's way, rather.

Emily is... I'm pretty sure that she wouldn't be very honest about her views on Naomi, if anyone asked her. She probably knows more about what Sophia is thinking, than her own thoughts.

Make sure you revise appropriately! :)

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interpol_ice April 11 2011, 12:09:27 UTC
And this explains many things, Naomi supposes. The fact that Pandora’s mum is dancing like a lava lamp, for example.

^ occasional stroke of genius? check.

sophia moore, you cockblocker. and having sophia kiss emily?? really really totally wasn't expecting that.

in summary, another brilliant chap!

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triptohere April 11 2011, 18:04:56 UTC
Occasional? Only occasional? ;)

Thank you, I am very happy with my Sophia ~plot twist~!

Cheers dear!

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triptohere April 12 2011, 17:14:53 UTC
You're making me love Naomily more than the actual show tbh Mwhaha, this was my plan, actually. S4 left such a bad taste in my mouth that I wanted to find a way to find them cute all over again. I also vastly prefer writing about them when Emily isn't an attractive, but nevertheless slightly deranged, stalker.

Thanks dude, I'm really pleased you're enjoying it ♥

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