The only thing I would say you should work on is your comma usage and your spelling. That said, your porn is some of the HOTTEST porn ever. Sometimes I have to fan myself while I'm reading ^^;
So keep up the raunchily good work, ne? ^_________^
your fic is just stellar, i love them all so much. i do agree with the above commenter and think that you need to learn how to better use commas. it's really hard to read your fics sometimes because of that.
Your writing has progressed and evolved wonderfully. You just keep getting better and better which is so awesome to see. Your fics always give off such a lovely warmth and always leave me smiling. Keep writing! ♥
You were always a good writer, but you've steadily improved. You're very versatile, which is something that can't be said of a lot of writers, so be proud! But you should just write a lot more, because writers can always get better, and also because your readers fall over themselves whenever they see that you've written something, so you should make us happy! :)
fuck this anon thingskycouldfallMay 19 2009, 07:50:55 UTC
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR WRITING. gah. it's just so vivid, shows emotion, and you make it flow so easily. j;kldjhf um. just. no words can describe it correctly. WRITE MORE, YOU'RE AMAZING AT IT.
I have one complaint. You don't write enough 8DDD Seriously though, everything you write is always put together with so much thought and, as far as I can tell, rock solid. I adore your writing and it's always a pleasure reading anything by you ♥
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ahhh, this is embarassing.
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So keep up the raunchily good work, ne? ^_________^
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Seconded yo!
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