Comments | triwizardfqf: FIC: Reluctant Student | <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/simons_flower">simons_flower</a></strong> | Harry/Cedric

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FIC: Reluctant Student | simons_flower | Harry/Cedric | NC-17

Mar 21, 2006 01:45

challenge: 51. What really happened in the maze when the hedges blocked off certain paths and two champions found themselves blocked in the same stretch with no way out?
title: Reluctant Student
author: simons_flower
beta: satindolls
summary: Unexpected things happen when you’re trapped. There are some you never acknowledge.
pairing: Harry/Cedric
genre: action/ ( Read more... )

Comments 19

sev1970 March 21 2006, 08:40:15 UTC

That was very well done. It's hard to write Cedric and Harry being the ages they are - the use of dubious consent was a good choice. I also like the fact that Cedric didn't penetrate Harry - I have a hard time seeing that happening between Harry and Cedric for some reason - lol! I loved the following quote:

the hedge seems to be reacting to what we’re doing. Perverted hedge.

Hehe - a bit of humour!

simons_flower March 22 2006, 04:50:05 UTC

Thanks. I had originally intended for them to just be trapped and talk about girls, but Cedric had other ideas. I think he knew he was doomed and wanted a last little bit.

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simons_flower March 22 2006, 04:51:07 UTC

I didn't intend for Cedric to be a pedophile, though :)

The humor seems to seep in sometimes. Thanks!

kerryblaze March 21 2006, 15:21:06 UTC

It wasn't that dark! Ron didn't die! ;)

Great job! I agree with those above that was a great line!!

simons_flower March 22 2006, 04:51:35 UTC

I don't always kill Ron!

And thanks!

You Teaser!!! lockythebunny March 21 2006, 20:28:45 UTC

Now you made me hungry!!! ^_^

You so have to continue this!!!! It's... awesome!!! ^_^ Liked it a lot!!

Re: You Teaser!!! simons_flower March 22 2006, 04:52:17 UTC

Thanks for the review. It would be difficult to continue, though, because Cedric dies.

Re: You Teaser!!! lockythebunny March 22 2006, 17:29:36 UTC

Ummm... no he doesn't. He actually escaped to Bulgaria along with Viktor... though some people say (that would be me), that when Voldemort saw him, he said to Wormtail:

"Look at that hottie! This is what I want you to do: do one of those lousy 'Avada Kedavras' of yours and knock off the hottie that came with Potter. I'll confuse Potter's mind, and then you replace the hottie with one of the dummie corpses we have in the storage room. Lock the hottie in my rooms. Are we clear?"
"Stunt the hottie, confuse Potter, replace the hottie with a dummy corpse. Lock hottie in Master's room. Understood, Dark Lord."
"Good, now let's work. Wormtail! Get rid of the spare!!"
"heh... yes Dark Lord!!"

He didn't die. So, are you going to write a sequel? Please?... More? We want more Cedric!!! ^_^

Re: You Teaser!!! simons_flower March 24 2006, 04:12:51 UTC

No, there will be no sequel.

tqpannie March 22 2006, 23:00:42 UTC

Wonderful job and the characterization is sooo not my fault. LOL!

simons_flower March 24 2006, 04:18:14 UTC

Thank you and is so.