Licorice

Feb 08, 2022 11:56


Laurel's deft, small hands weaving strands of rainbow into different spools by color, the first time Syl was able to watch her brother work the threads, left Syl breathless.

"Do you see how he uses each finger to guide a different color?" Syl's mother whispered, careful to avoid interrupting Laurel's concentration. The cool of the cave caused ( Read more... )

ljidol, licorice, ljidol week 1, black rainbow

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bleodswean February 8 2022, 20:50:26 UTC
What an imaginative and tasty take on the prompt! Fun!

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troof_therry February 11 2022, 20:33:34 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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drippedonpaper February 9 2022, 02:41:10 UTC
Wow, that is just lovely and creative!

I really like it. How candy was created/discovered. Very clever!

I look forward to reading more of your writing!

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troof_therry February 11 2022, 20:34:18 UTC

I'm looking forward to writing more, thanks for your comment!

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stellinasusan February 9 2022, 12:52:36 UTC
This was a very original piece using the prompt,enjoyed it so much,thanks and good luck x

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troof_therry February 11 2022, 20:35:52 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm happy it came across as original. Good luck to you also!

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viagra February 10 2022, 18:38:55 UTC
I like this world that you've created! And I'm happy to see that Syl was able to find her talent, something unique to her that no one else can take away.

I hate licorice, though! (My husband loves it and I just don't understand...)

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estelle February 11 2022, 08:45:27 UTC
There are differences. I thought I didn't like it until I had some from a specialty place.

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troof_therry February 11 2022, 20:33:09 UTC

I didn't like it until I was 20, and I agree, I think licorice from the right maker is a wholly different experience.

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troof_therry February 11 2022, 20:37:05 UTC

Thanks! Licorice is definitely a particular kind of taste. It's still not my very fave.

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pixiebelle February 10 2022, 21:55:29 UTC
I like the angle you took with this. I’ve never liked black licorice but I haven’t had it since I was a child. Makes me want to try some!

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troof_therry February 11 2022, 21:42:39 UTC

One of my friends was just talking about salty licorice, which I guess is a way of making licorice even more unapproachable. Maybe it's ok to not like the taste of everything, huh?

Thanks for reading!

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