Into the Darkness ~Chapter 6~

[tsu]

Please read the warnings, and bear in mind that they are there for a reason. *nods emphatically*

Title: Into the Darkness ~Chapter 6~
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[alchemistjunkie]

*tears up*

Fuck.

that just about sums it up. That was.....fuck. *goes in coherent and babbles andcries in corner*

Great job once again

[tsu]

It was truly one of the most horrifying things that I could think of. I'm not particularly proud of it, but, well, yeah.

[akari_hayashi]

You are so mindfucking me. Before this chapter, I was thinking like at least Roy got the "better deal" and wasn't sexually abused. But now... *wails* Roy... Ed...

[tsu]

*pats head* Don't cry, really. As for the mindfucking, well, I DID warn you. :3

[threeonetwo]

You are an evil horrible person and I want to marry you and have your children. I mean all of that in the best way possible. Please post more as quickly as possible. Please. Or I'll go insane. But not really. I almost cried during this. Ok. Yes. Amazing chapter, as usual. Just. Amazing.

[tsu]

*sniff* Me? Evil and horrible? Well, maybe. If only my Sunday School teachers could read this. Or just about anyone who knows me. I think they'd die of shock.

I'm trying to get Ch. 7 done, I really am. But the end of the chapter is being kind of a prick. It's also the last chapter. Well, besides the epilogue. I'm thinking about splitting 7 into two parts, but I don't really want to. I've got a half an hour before FMA's on, I'll see what I can get done by then. I'm determined to finish this monster this weekend, though.

[threeonetwo]

Please do, or I'll die from withdrawal. Yes.

[tsu]

No, don't die, please! I'll have more up soon. I'm finishing final touches on 7 now, I promise!

[ex_fuctrack]

*just read chapters 2 to 6 in a row*

....

*speechless*

It seems so horribly, horribly wrong to want more of this fic, but you've just completely blown me away with how shocking it is. Your writing skill is amazing, and I have to commend you for having the stomach to write this-- It probably takes more of a stomach to do that than to read it like we all seem to enjoy doing.

[tsu]

*shrugs* You know, I think that the actual act of writing it manages to numb me a bit. It's easier to think of it from an analytical standpoint, trying to get the word usage right, making sure I didn't use the same pronoun five times in a row, and that sort of thing.

Going back and reading it over later is when it makes me want to go curl up in a corner and whimper.

[ex_fuctrack]

Yeah I can understand that. I get horribly embarrassed trying to write smut in fanfics or roleplays and tend to just zone out and think of it all as words and ignore the meaning behind them... Only then when I read it do I blush and die xD So I can understand where you're coming from.

All the same, I really (sadistically?) enjoy this fic! Write more soon~

[sexpress]

Absolutely incredible. You have an amazing talent for writing and characerzation. Roy's and Ed's reactions to their current situation are perfect. I personally am a big fan of dark themes, and your story is a great read.

[tsu]

*blushes*