the life in a day [An Erasure]

[turkeyish]

Title: the life in a day
Original Text(s) Erased: Strong, Smoke, Frost, Five Stages of Grief
Erased By: turkeyish
Original Text By: caramelsilver
Fandom (of original text): Narnia
Fandom (of erasure): N/A

Comments

[caramelsilver]

GOODNESS! I somehow never told you how lovely this is! It's absolutely gorgeous. I especially like the beginning:

Unlike not speaking the truth
He spent half his life training himself to spot liars
and had always been easy to read anyway

what a wonderful game
What imagination
the twitch in the corner
tight glassy desperation

either agree or argue
before swiftly leaving

THANK YOU SO MUCH, for this lovely, awesome erasure. THANK YOU!