Yesterday was national kissing day, and I was talking about how it would have been a good excuse for a kiss meme, and how it seemed those kind of themed memes seemed to have died out a little
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Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 1/2jedusaurJuly 8 2011, 22:35:33 UTC
(co-written by me and verbynaPete wanted to stop talking, and Patrick decided the best way to accomplish this was deepthroating. Pete really only ever stops talking when he can't breathe, but that's all right. Patrick knows Pete's limits better than Pete does. So he fucked Pete's throat with one hand tight in his hair and the other gentle on his cheek, and now Pete is on the floor gasping
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Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 2/2jedusaurJuly 8 2011, 22:35:52 UTC
Finally, Pete moves those extra inches back into Patrick's space and moves to take his hand. His fingers are shaking a little. Patrick holds still, being solid for Pete, letting him know that solids still exist. When Pete's breathing smoothes out and he's not going to startle, Patrick wraps an arm around him and pulls him into his lap. Pete rests his head against Patrick's shoulder and Patrick holds him, tightly enough to keep him grounded, not tightly enough to send him back into the headspace he doesn't need anymore
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Re: Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 2/2gala_applesJuly 8 2011, 22:59:09 UTC
*grins* I would still have read it if you'd titled it Afterblow.
I really liked the line of Pete trusting everyone, and Patrick being the only one that deserves it. And of course I just like the whole scene, Pete just screams sub to me.
Re: Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 2/2gala_applesJuly 8 2011, 23:34:52 UTC
I laughed FOREVER when I read that the first time, it's just as funny now. I actually had this conversation last night. Well, sort of. WHY WON'T MY FIC BE TITLED. friend: dunno. WHHHHY friend: have you opened itunes? *snicker* YES. ALL THE SONGS ABOUT WRISTS ARE ABOUT SLITTING THEM. friend: well i guess you're fucked then. WAIT I CAN USE QUOTES *GOOGLES* friend: how'd that turn out? FUCK THEY'RE ALL ABOUT SLITTING AND SLASHING TOO. MY FIC HATES ME.
Re: Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 2/2verbynaJuly 9 2011, 01:45:35 UTC
That conversation was resumed when I wrote the Bareback To The Future fic. I ended up calling it Traveling Light (J's suggestion, of course, I am USELESS at titles). She beta'd it, since, you know. Her fault. I used to go for quotes from the stuff I'd read, but these days it's all kinky porn and Central European philosophers. Not helpful, self. /o\
Re: Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 2/2jedusaurJuly 9 2011, 05:24:06 UTC
Yeah? Name one thing you've written, ever, that could not be appropriately titled with a quote relating to either kinky porn or Central European philosophy. Name one.
Re: Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 2/2verbynaJuly 9 2011, 06:32:49 UTC
One day, J. One day I will write something that can't be appropriately titled thus. (And then I won't like it and I'll delete it and you'll be right anyway, dammit.)
Re: Pete/Patrick -- Up For Air 2/2romanticalgirlJuly 9 2011, 15:15:26 UTC
Oh, this is so great. The trust and the knowledge of each other and the fact that the trust isn't always deserved and how much Pete needs and...oh. Just lovely.
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I really liked the line of Pete trusting everyone, and Patrick being the only one that deserves it. And of course I just like the whole scene, Pete just screams sub to me.
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Glad you enjoyed! :D
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WHY WON'T MY FIC BE TITLED.
friend: dunno.
WHHHHY
friend: have you opened itunes? *snicker*
YES. ALL THE SONGS ABOUT WRISTS ARE ABOUT SLITTING THEM.
friend: well i guess you're fucked then.
WAIT I CAN USE QUOTES *GOOGLES*
friend: how'd that turn out?
FUCK THEY'RE ALL ABOUT SLITTING AND SLASHING TOO. MY FIC HATES ME.
My life. It is sooooo hard. *FLAIL*
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Life. So hard, indeed. *sadface*
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They work together so well.
It's not so much a kiss as another point of contact, a way to communicate so that Pete understands without overthinking.
Just lovely.
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