Ouroboros | Alexander

Nov 14, 2005 19:09

X-posted to atgstories, alexanderfics, and maryrenaultfics. Also, to maryrenault because shezan said I should.

Title: Ouroboros
Author: Whitesakura
Rating: PG
Pairing: Alexander/Hephaistion
Disclaimer: I don't own them.
Summary: ( Alexander knows well the beauty of snakes. )

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trust_n0_1 November 15 2005, 19:33:59 UTC
How utterly beautiful. I have cold snake shivers going up and down my spine.

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twhitesakura November 15 2005, 20:41:37 UTC
*Hypnotic swaying* Thank you. You do realize though, that the snakes have you, me and Alexander in their grip now. *Fanged smile*

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meyrevived November 15 2005, 20:04:05 UTC
So amazing! so beautiful! I never saw something quite as lovely and historically correct as this! kyaaa! you have to write more of this or a longer fic, you must, I demand it!

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twhitesakura November 15 2005, 20:47:01 UTC
B-But, that's where it ends! And I bet it's not really accurate at all. XD

Hmm...but since you want more, maybe I could do the fic from Hephaistion's point of view. And I've written other Alexander fics. Go to my userinfo and then to memories. I think my writing is the most poetic/pretty when I write Alexander stuff. So glad you liked!

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meyrevived November 15 2005, 21:38:55 UTC
I meant write longer fics!

I will explore the rest of your history fics when back from tomorrow and the day after tomorrow's trip ^_^

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jun_hinotori November 16 2005, 02:14:01 UTC
Oh! I read this fic in my office ;_; I love it!

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twhitesakura November 16 2005, 19:07:34 UTC
Thank you! I hope you didn't get in trouble reading fic at the office, though.

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heroineanilem November 16 2005, 10:38:31 UTC
So powerful and poetical in the same time. It's very touching and I love it's bittersweet note. It's sad to know how Alexander's quest for immortality killed Hephaistion, but so true, nonetheless.

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twhitesakura November 16 2005, 19:10:25 UTC
Thank you for the compliment. I'm not sure if Alexander was really responsible for Hephaistion's death, though. I think they said Hephaistion died of typhus or some disease he got from drinking bad water.

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heroineanilem November 17 2005, 10:45:54 UTC
Oh, yes it's true, at least according to historians. What I meant is that Alexander's intensive way of life, constant moving from one place to another caused it in a way. Historians agree that typhus could've been brought with soldiers from any of those far places; and even if it was bad water that caused it, it's b/c Europeans weren't/aren't used to drink water in countries of Middle East and Africa.
Anyways, I ran to read other of your stories and I simply loved them all, they hold some lirical quality few people could express.

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alexandria_47 November 19 2005, 14:57:47 UTC
Short, powerful, and evocative. A real treat and a stunning example of the volumes that can be said with few words. Please write again in this fandom.

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twhitesakura November 20 2005, 01:19:42 UTC
Thank you for the compliments! You can find more of my Alexander fics in my LJ's memories. Unfortunately, I usually only get short bursts of inspiration, so I can't say when the next fic will happen, but I'd definitely like to continue writing.

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