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Hearts (hand-made): 1.50 quid a piece

Dec 27, 2009 18:47

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RECIPIENT WHO HAD BETTER BE GRATEFUL BECAUSE I SPENT TIME THAT I COULD HAVE BEEN DRINKING WRITING THIS SHIT: lionessvalentiSUMMARY: HEARTS, YEAH ( Read more... )

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wynkat1313 December 28 2009, 18:34:02 UTC

oh wow. this is amazing. heart wrenching and powerful (and I'm really glad I'm reading it in the daylight).

kel_reiley December 28 2009, 20:33:23 UTC

oh damn
i love this, the whole overall feel of it
(i think i know who you are, but i'm not going to say, in case i'm wrong)
but your way with words, and how it all unfolds, god you are amazing

huesiemama December 29 2009, 05:02:00 UTC

Just shattering. Wow.

51stcenturyfox December 29 2009, 16:33:38 UTC

It's not easy to say I love you amidst the monsters in his head, and Ianto knows that you don't say things like that to enemy fire.

*sigh* Just fantastic. I could pull loads of things I like and point them out, but I love this.

blue_fjords December 30 2009, 05:43:03 UTC

This was very cool, and what an interesting style! I think it really worked for that time period; a fascinating melding of story and format.

Everyone else seemed to comment on this bit, but dagnabbit, I liked it, too! So I am regardless:
"Ianto!" Coat despite the heat, and a blue shirt underneath, Ianto's boss stops by the counter. Past him the others crawl up from the sewers slip through the door and outside. They're Ianto's co-workers, really, they are the M and the 5, while Ianto's office space proudly proclaims the i for ice-cream welcome, information offered. They look like danger, while Ianto is clutching his girl elephant with the long neon pink lashes.
I like how that bit flows, especially!

Beautiful, Anon!