kim jongin's guide to loving oh sehun

Feb 10, 2013 10:20

title: kim jongin's guide to loving oh sehun
pairing: i don't know, don't you get sassy with me.
length: oneshot // 7.5k
genre: angst, romance
note: this is sad and boring and long, & the list is based off her poem
Summary: sehun isn't atlas and even kings have scars that never bleed.

(jongin talks of worn-out 'once upon a time's, never touching the gold-engraved 'the end's.) )

p:sekai, g:angst, g:romance, l:oneshot, r:pg-13

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ficssucker February 12 2013, 00:30:54 UTC
this is the first time i cries my eyes out (probably still crying while writing this) reading sekai really this is beautiful but but BUT whyyy???
i hate you but i love you but i hate you huhuhu- just gonna die in sekai arms

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uberchrome February 12 2013, 00:37:01 UTC
oooh. don't worry, i love you for reading this and commenting.
/hands you tissues/

this is my first time writing sekai and i don't do sekai. maybe that's why i made it sad ;~;

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ficssucker February 12 2013, 03:23:02 UTC
this is heartwrecking, really. just when the flowers start to bloom and...
are you an expert in writing angst? how about some make-up-fluffy-sekai fic for this one? i'm just asking tho
thank you for writing this and give your contribution for sekai shipper out there TT_TTeventho you're not even shipping sekai

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uberchrome February 12 2013, 03:45:11 UTC
it's angst or crackety-crack or ant-attracting fluff.
there's this fic i'm writing and it's mostly action and mystery and idk, i kind of think it's cool to try to add tidbits of each genre in a fic :)

maybe i'll take your offer up for that sekai fluff.
/but CAN YOU IMAGINE HOW HARD IT IS FOR ME TO THINK OF SEHUN in fluff. i can't fluff sehun, but i'll try. and i normally don't suggest other fics to my readers because, i don't know, i don't think it's right. but to compensate for your tears, i did write some crack and fluff in this journal (senpai noticed me) (getting layd).

and no, thank you for reading really. i nearly gave up on this fic because i was so frustrated about the ending. i never get frustrated at endings ;~;

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jyusou February 12 2013, 05:53:32 UTC
uberchrome February 12 2013, 14:49:38 UTC
oh gosh /breath

thanks for commenting though ;~:

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tiffany_blue7 February 12 2013, 14:45:15 UTC
i cant breathe

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uberchrome February 12 2013, 14:51:29 UTC
awww /hugs you anyway/
thanks for reading and commenting~

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tiffany_blue7 February 12 2013, 15:26:20 UTC
i've some of your other stories. 9.8 M/S² and Senpai noticed me are my favourites so far.

Im a fan. Big Fan. Write more /hugs/

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uberchrome February 13 2013, 04:22:58 UTC
i think 9.8 M/S² is when i started to write differently.
err i've written about 35+ fics, but i'm only proud of a few, so i'll be posting more here when i write! :)

& can i hug you ;A; i'm so happy that you like reading my stories. it means a lot.

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clap13times February 13 2013, 16:30:48 UTC
i hate you so much right now. You're sending a whirlwind of emotions right through the little red and mushy organ that's left from my heart because 1) kray-> laughter, 2) sekai -> I CRY 3)your comment -> laughter.
I will send you the bill for my psychiatrist. Really. I love you oh god.

I will start now and don't expect this to make any sense because what is a brain and you know I like quoting and ... I should stop ranting about nothing okay

here a small rant because I love how you characterized sehun and he's so perfect omg (Depressed but bratty)
"a mischievous child yet to be punished for a juvenile crime."
"just that sehun smelled like baby lotion and had the emotional capacity of a rock. "
" a voice that made jongin think of vanilla ice creams with chocolate syrup and rainbow sprinkles on top. "
"when jongin asked why he was talking to him, sehun simply called jongin a bastard. "

"he only pursed his lips shut when they stopped in front of a run-down bar that looked twice as old as his frail friend, joonmyun. joonmyun is in his ( ... )

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uberchrome February 13 2013, 16:46:49 UTC
don't fuck with me, teppawesome.
/translation: i am sobbing right now and i don't know i just feel so happy because of you. i love you and i won't strike that.

and i just

1) i think that (aside from 9.8) this one shot took the longest time for me to write /this took a few DAYS/ like srsly don't even. that's why i was frustrated.

2) i think the plot was rather fickle. really. i just added a little bit of detail and facts to make it seem like i wasn't making it all up because yes, i feel like it's silly to have sekai as neighbors.

2.5) i like spaces between my lines tyvm.

3) what is talented. do you eat it? isn't that what you're made up of...

4) of course i don't. i mean i'd have to be gramp's suho's age to have experienced them all. i just read and listen. and fuck~ AND OF COURSE MASSIVE FEELS BECAUSE OF EXO. I HOPE YOU DON'T GET MAD BECAUSE I LET KAISOO SOB ON EACH OTHER'S SHOULDERS ( ... )

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clap13times February 13 2013, 16:58:31 UTC
now you know how I generally feel when writing with you because how and wow

1) that's sad because it often takes me, like, a month for finishing a oneshot.
2) sekai neighbours are the best though
2.5) I don't
3) it's that faint fog that's swirling around in your brain
4) I hoped so haha and I CAN FORGIVE YOU BECAUSE REASONS YOU WILL SEE

I'm just letting you know that I'm starting another kaisoo atm and that means you'll get two and why am I doing this but I'm in a drama mood and muse isn't doing anything good for that okay

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uberchrome February 13 2013, 17:10:38 UTC
1) Lucky you, there's a nagging voice in my head that won't shut up unless i write a specific word count for a day. can we exchange brains plz. yours sounds calmer and better and gheier and i would die.

2) i should have added a part where jongin wanted to peek into naked sehun but oh well. why didn't i think of that.

2.5) why are we writing like this. this is kawaii desu~ though not to mention that spaces are pleasing to the eyes. sort of like my face.

3) let's skype later when i'm being useless on bed so i can show you the meaning of talent and how much of it is actually in your brain.

4) are you gonna give some sekai moments in that kaisoo one shot

yes please oh my god. make the other one nc-17 because i failed at the kray one /sobs sparkles over your chest and shoulders and wipes them on your face/ & why are you torturing yourself with that ;A; i'm in a good modd now so /super-glued hugs/

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hipployta February 14 2013, 04:35:31 UTC
No...my K Maknae line are for cute High School AUs...not sad plots and character death :-(

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uberchrome February 14 2013, 09:12:20 UTC
oooh. i can't cute[ify] sehun, tho ;/
but thanks for reading & commenting~

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