Work In Progress...

[ubernerd13]

I'm working on a song, but there's two ways I can go with it...
I'm not sure which way I should, so i'll as you all for opinions. Tentatively, it's called

Comments

[heartpirate]

I think you should split it into several different songs. Just because it would be very hard to get to one whole idea with all the different stanzas you have written here. You know what I mean? It seems very incomplete, without meaning, unless you find some idea(s) to tie it all together into a cohesive thought, which is what you sorta HAVE to do if you don't want the song to be, y'know, bad.

and dude, I totally have your birthday present. come to class Friday.

[ubernerd13]

Yeah, that's kind of what I was thinking too. I did have a half plan because these were all verses and I was going to make the chorus the thing that connected them all, but I'm too lazy to do that anyway.