Chapter 2-ish

[uisgebeatha]

I'm a whole day early putting this up on account of steaming through this week's editing mountain. Today has been brought to you by incoherent rage at crap news pieces and finding a South American internet radio station that's full of 80sRight, angry people in the 80s, you say? Have some more book words. I'm 75% sure there's more of Chapter 2 and

Comments

[kimbleshi]

Only just had time to read this. If it is going to be posted a chapter at a time I will go mad. Comment wise if you're interested; I've not been thrown out of a single sentence - you know when you're reading and something is wrong and it screws up your whole flow? Not once. I approve! It flows very well. In my world that is the difference between enjoying a book and endless frustration.

[kimbleshi]

Just to make clear: I very much appreciate the chapters being posted. I'm just not good with suspense and am greedy so want more!

[uisgebeatha]

Heh; the plan is to post as much of it as I'm happy with, by which point the edit will be finished and I'll actually be looking at the tedious publishing side. I should get on with putting more up, but I'm having a 'wading through verbal treacle' editing day :/

Glad to hear it flows well! It's one of my top bugbears reading other people's stuff too...