Secrets I'm Dying To Keep

Aug 10, 2008 02:00

Title: Secrets I'm Dying To Keep
Genre: Angst
Rating: Pg-13
Paring: Jaejoong-centric
Summary: Jaejoong is slowly being worn down.
A/N: I'm thinking of extending this, depending on the reviews I get(if i get any). If I extend it, I'm planning on doing a pairing so if there are any suggestions for a specific pair, then they're more than welcome. And ( Read more... )

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crimeis August 10 2008, 06:24:27 UTC
♥♥ this was brilliant, perfect win and fits - i'd love to read more. it's really wonderfully written, descriptions and such - captured my attention completely. the tone and subtle flow, i'm addicted. do continue and i'd like to suggest a jaejoong/junsu pair but any will do since band 'au is win and jaejoong-centric, yes/yes? i really enjoyed reading dear. (:

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umai_jae_ai August 10 2008, 07:05:38 UTC
Thankyou so much, I've had such writers block recently, and I was so happy to finally be able to write something again. I have no idea which pairing I'm gunna do, but so far I think it's between Junsu, and Changmin. Thank you for commenting, it really means alot to me.

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meer_sshi August 10 2008, 06:28:35 UTC
Hi. I'm pretty new to this community and I haven't had time to read many fics yet. But I think this one is interesting. Well written. As for pairings, I think it would be a good idea. Though I can't really suggest any pairs because I still don't know DBSK well enough, I'd like to see the Max/Hero pair. I think they're soo cute together ^_^.

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umai_jae_ai August 10 2008, 07:08:35 UTC
Thankyou for reading and commenting. Jaemin(hero/max) really is such a sweet pairing. Max is one that I'm definitely considering. Thankyou again.

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mrs_min_ai August 10 2008, 06:32:46 UTC
thank you bb~!♥ i love the tragedy of this sooooo much! you wrote it really well... *is proud* if you do continue, i second the jaejoong/junsu pairing. but it's all up to you! this was lovely!!! thanks again!!!

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umai_jae_ai August 10 2008, 07:11:31 UTC
Hello!!!!!!!! It feels weird replying to you here when our im is minimized on my compurter lol, but I suddenly wanted to because it made me feel warm and fuzzy inside(perhaps its just your icon j/k lol). Anyways every pairing has been proposed at least once!! Oh-toh-kae????

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mrs_min_ai August 10 2008, 21:41:43 UTC
hm... weird replying to you again, but it's fun!!! XD anyhoo, i seen a lot of your other comment's and a lot of people are suggesting jaemin, and you know i'm always up for them. but yeah, it's gonna be a hard decision, good luck with that!!! :D maybe you should just keep it a jae-centric, just so you don't have to choose! XD

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umai_jae_ai August 10 2008, 23:33:38 UTC
lol, yea it is weird, but i know!! so much jaemin!!! Aish! Why is life so hard.....................Meet you at the bridge in 30 minutes? I'll bring the cookies.

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umai_jae_ai August 10 2008, 07:13:37 UTC
Jaechun does make a really good angsty couple don't they lol

Thankyou for commenting

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mcgrjc6 August 10 2008, 06:51:59 UTC
Oh I really like this! Dark and angsty, but spawned from the love of his family! I really liked this as Jae-centric and I would love to see a continuation. But if I had to say a pairing...I'd want it to be Jaemin!

Please continue it!!!

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umai_jae_ai August 10 2008, 07:17:01 UTC
Thankyou so much for commenting. Wow you're the 3rd one to propose Jaemin, I love that couple so much, but I'm still not sure which one i'm gunna use. I'm try to continue it as soon as I can. Thankyou again for commenting.

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