Series: Possession (Finale)

Mar 06, 2011 15:03

Title: Possession
Chapter: 11
Pairing: (1) Aiba Masaki and Sakurai Sho
(2) Aiba Masaki and Matsumoto Jun
(3) Ninomiya Kazunari and Ohno Satoshi
Genre: Romance, AU, Angst
Rating: R
Beta: laurachan2, kos_mos26
x-posted: arashirabu, jent_fanfics
Notes: This is to fulfill camaronzin's request of a Yakuza Arashi ( Read more... )

c: ohno, c: aiba, c: jun, g: angst, g: au, c: nino, r: r, c: sho

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nande_daiyo March 7 2011, 08:39:28 UTC
Honestly I can't tell how the ending is. I mean obviously its a befitting end.

But Aiba. Heck he might escape, become a chief's wife or a chief himself.

(calls for a spin-off see?)

It's actually really cool that you gave Aiba's character so much substance at the end. :)

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umitsubame March 7 2011, 14:14:05 UTC
Hahaha, he might escape or decide to become chief himself, but he can't obviously become chief's wife ... it's not legal. He could become a partner though. Although, becoming a chief won't be easy, since I have no idea if he had formal training for that role since birth. I'd think he might have some sort of training in management, but he has already disappointed his parents by not following the management path.

If Aiba didn't react the way he did to that murder, then Sho better run the other direction coz there is something seriously wrong with Aiba!!

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cherry1989 March 7 2011, 15:30:00 UTC
Yakuza Sho is scary! Seriously scary! But I like the ending <3 Aiba is being stubborn XD I wonder if they'll become real loving couple later on...
Thanks for writing, I enjoyed this series <3

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umitsubame March 10 2011, 23:39:40 UTC
Absolutely. He'd never forgive anyone who tries to hurt Aiba, but he forgot that he should handle Aiba a little more delicately in the heat of the moment.

Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed the series.

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betzi_chan March 7 2011, 20:43:21 UTC
wow.
the end is not like i hoped it would be...
it is really harsh and i thought sho would be more gentle to aiba. but i was wrong.
but i think the end was the best suitable at that moment.
would have been more time went by, then maybe it could have been different.
i like the ending, besides the fact that sho is so... mean/brutal to aiba. it let's some space for my own imagination. ^^

thank you for sharing this story.
i enjoyed reading! ^^

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umitsubame March 10 2011, 23:40:45 UTC
If Sho hadn't lost his mind with worry, he probably would have been more gentle. But since he had already done the deed, there was no hiding who he really is and if he let Aiba go, I doubt he'd get him back ever. So, in his mind, he has no choice but to trap Aiba forever.

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed reading it.

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jutaaaa March 7 2011, 21:32:21 UTC
well.. how unexpected..
the real cold-blooded Sakurai Sho and full of anger and hate Aiba Masaki..
I thought that this fic will have a happy ending and not.. so unexpected.. I just can't named it diffrently..
but I still think it is very good story!!

thank you for shering it with us!

I hope that you create some new story about Sakuraiba ^.^

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umitsubame March 10 2011, 23:42:44 UTC
Sho was always cold-blooded. He just covered it up and acted gentle to woo Aiba. If I was Aiba, I'd also be angry and scared about Sho and probably hate him forever for doing this.

This fic never had a happy ending from the beginning. I was hoping for one when I started it, but this is the ending it chose.

Thank you for reading it and I hope you enjoyed it.

The next one isn't Sakuraiba. It's a Jun/Toma drabble series that started a few weeks ago.

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syri_chii March 9 2011, 10:51:42 UTC
I... I didn't expect the ending. *still shocked*

If only Sho didn't act(being ruthless yakuza) like that in front Aiba, they would be happier...

But I like how you ended this. It felt realistic to me.

anyway, I enjoyed reading this. There are too many emotions put into this and it's really good read.

thank you for writing.

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umitsubame March 10 2011, 23:46:49 UTC
Haha, well, I hope it was a good shock and not one that gave you nightmares at the end.

Yeah, if only Sho had kept his head together, then maybe Aiba wouldn't have been so angry as to try to leave him in the end. Who knows how long Aiba will really stay bound to him like a prisoner.

I'm glad you think it was realistic. There is just no way for this series to end happily, the way it was going anyway.

Thanks for reading it till the end.

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