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umitsubame

Series: Possession (Finale)

Mar 06, 2011 15:03

Title: Possession
Chapter: 11
Pairing: (1) Aiba Masaki and Sakurai Sho
(2) Aiba Masaki and Matsumoto Jun
(3) Ninomiya Kazunari and Ohno Satoshi
Genre: Romance, AU, Angst
Rating: R
Beta: laurachan2, kos_mos26
x-posted: arashirabu, jent_fanfics
Notes: This is to fulfill camaronzin's request of a Yakuza Arashi ( Read more... )

c: ohno, c: aiba, c: jun, g: angst, g: au, c: nino, r: r, c: sho

Comments 32

vampyrrep June 7 2011, 11:16:31 UTC

call me a weirdo but i guess i've had too many jerks as boyfriends so i understand why sho did what he did.. sorry..i'm a certified doormat..

umitsubame June 7 2011, 13:11:41 UTC

I'm sure if Sho had let Aiba go at that time, Aiba would run away without looking back. But even now, Aiba is probably just abiding his time, waiting for the right opportunity to take off and get lost, to never be found by Sho.

andreja1989 July 1 2011, 22:08:12 UTC

yo I finished reading :) sorry for not commenting on every chapter :P this was good and I liked it :) thank you for sharing :)

umitsubame July 2 2011, 16:41:20 UTC

Thank you for reading =D

I'm glad you liked it.

nakabibighani September 28 2011, 06:52:12 UTC

Yeah, I found chapters 10 and 11 only after leaving that super long comment in chapter 9. Hm, why do I get the feeling that this story was cut short? I am still kind of curious as to what happened to Ohno and Nino. It would also be nice to know what Aiba will do and if he would leave/be able to leave Sho. Nevertheless, this series was definitely a great read so thank you! And I have not explored yet but are some of your fics f-locked? If so, is it possible for us to add each other? Only if you want to of course. Again, congratulations! ^_^

umitsubame October 5 2011, 03:25:36 UTC

I just finished reading your comment on Chapter 9 and thank you for that. It made my day enough to make me come out of my semi-hiatus to reply to you.

As for the story being cut short, its because I had a few things going on in RL that took priority and couldn't dedicate too much time to the series.

As for what happened to Ohmiya, well ... I don't know. I'm not a big ohmiya fan, so I don't spend too much time on them. Just as much as needed for a story development. And since this was a Sakuraiba focus story, and Ohno/Nino relationship was not explored fully, I left them as they came.

Finally, yes, almost all the drabbles and ficlets are f-locked. If you add me, I can add you back.

nakabibighani October 5 2011, 05:10:47 UTC

Wow, my comment did that much? That makes me happy. And thank you for your kindness! I will add you soon as I post this reply.

As for the fic, so that's why. Well, we really cannot help it when RL gets into the future. Re Ohmiya, that was my bias talking curiosity. But I understand the development/non-development of their relationship in the fic. After all, as you pointed out, it was a Sakuraiba fic.

And to be honest, despite the fic being cut short, and the non-development of the Ohmiya relationship, the fic got me hooked. As I said, I read it in one sitting, lol. The pacing of the plot is just right. And it's something which kept me at the edge of my seat. When ending a chapter, I keep finding myself thinking, "I have to read the next chapter or I won't be at ease." I ended up finishing it, lol. So thanks again ;)

I'm excited to read your drabbles and ficlets. Especially the Sakuraiba ones. Thanks again!

nakabibighani October 5 2011, 05:12:30 UTC

*not future, but PICTURE