Now and Forever...Itsumademo... - Chapter 23

Mar 11, 2011 00:09

Title: Now and Forever…いつまでも…

Author: Unare Haineko

Pairing: [Juntoshi] Matsumoto Jun x Ohno Satoshi

Rating: R-ish, but NC-17 for this chapter

Summary: [Revised] Three years after the ending of ‘Kodoku kara Umareta Ai’, we have Juntoshi trying to raise their son Ayumu while the demons from the dark shadows that separated Arashi in KodoAi come back to ( Read more... )

now and forever, juntoshi, arashi, fanfic

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Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Iago’s Plans vs Miyazono’s, Side note about Nino, part mmestrange March 12 2011, 16:54:42 UTC
In this chapter, we have received hints that Iago (aka Johnny’s) greater schema of things might be falling apart. The illusion he has created of his business empire, the siphoning of his funds for his host club, and the plans he has to keep Arashi downtrodden are firmly in place is falling apart. Kei has refused to toggle the books any further than necessary and has sold information to Miyazono. Miyazono has somehow got hold of information on the drug angle as hinted in a previous chapter, and somehow Miyazono has come to the television station where Ayu had turned up to watch Nino. Indeed, Miyazono has successfully kept Kakia from getting her cloying perfume and gnarled hands on Ayu, so there is a spanner in Iago’s plans. While Iago’s plans start to crumble, Nino has plans of his own as he uses the milk of human kindness to work on Daisuke ( ... )

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Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Iago’s Plans vs Miyazono’s, Side note about Nino, part mmestrange March 12 2011, 16:55:44 UTC
(15) Although Ayu bears a striking resemblance to Jun, we know the boy is legally listed as Ohno’s child. What will happen when Daisuke tells Nino there is no Matsumoto Ayumu in the crowd? Will Daisuke say instead that there is an Ohno Ayumu instead? And if Daisuke manages to uncover this nugget, will Nino be able to join the pieces between Juntoshi, Ayu and Miyazono?

(16) What are Nino’s intentions in finding out who Ayu is? Does he hope to re-establish links with Jun so as to apologise?

(17) Will Daisuke report any of these occurrences to Kakia and Iago when he is asked?

(18) It is clear from this chapter that Miyazono had seen Nino. Now, what will do about it? Will he tell Jun? Or will he keep it to himself until he has unearthed more information?

(19) Who tipped Miyazono off that Kakia and her minions would be at the recording of the show at the television station?

(20) We know from previous chapters that he is aware of the JE drug links because he had spoken to someone answering to Tiny’s description. And he had been told ( ... )

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Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Iago’s Plans vs Miyazono’s, Side note about Nino, p unare_haineko March 13 2011, 23:35:28 UTC
What can I say, ufufu <3 Greed is such a delightful pleasure because it really encompasses so much of what gets humans into trouble. Greed is so addictive and has good friends like lust, envy, and gluttony who eagerly feed greed.

Iago and Daisuke aren't the only greedy ones. NaSA!Ohno doesn't like sharing Jun or can't get enough of him so he seeks out Reiya to get his fix. Ohno is a mess of sin. The only sins he isn't really guilty of are pride and wrath. Ohno should proceed with caution for if he tries to pursue both, he may end up with nothing. Perhaps Miyazono will offer Ohno to Iago as part of a gambit *snigger*

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Re: Commentary and Analyses, Chapter 23 – Iago’s Plans vs Miyazono’s, Side note about Nino, p mmestrange March 14 2011, 08:50:01 UTC
I am aware that the other characters, like our protagonists, are greedy too. But sooner or later, it will get the better of them. Ohno never had much in the way of pride to begin with in Kodoai, so it's expected. His wrath is probably tied to his lust, where he gets tetchy if his penis doesnt pull off its impersonation of a spraying hose.

Still, it must be said that I do like the idea of hubby throwing ohno to iago like someone might throw a dead chicken to the crocodiles - here, fresh meat, and while the croc is busy devouring the chicken, hubby and jun escape in the background. heh.

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madisonfink March 13 2011, 03:10:46 UTC
Dear! I'm so glad you're okay, and that I actually got this notification!

As always I'm forever your fan~ I missed your updates something terrible. ♥~

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unare_haineko March 13 2011, 23:38:47 UTC
Thank you, sweetie. I missed you too.

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dodityne April 8 2011, 14:23:58 UTC
Hmmm for some reason only half the post can be seen. I tried reloading but still same.

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unare_haineko April 8 2011, 17:22:20 UTC
The comments are screened? Try replying to this comment. Either that or LJ is being retarded again...lol

Sorry, I totally misread your comment. I thought you said comment. Um...hmmm...I tried looking at it without being logged in, it looks okay from my work computer.

If you're really interested in reading it, I can email it to you (I don't know if it will all fit in a PM). Let me know if there's anything I can do.

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