Architecture

Dec 09, 2005 06:40

She sat in one of the wooden garden chairs that sit atop the deck, back against the house. She cupped her glass with two hands and watched her husband and his brother on top of the garage. They weren’t more than 30 feet away, but distinctly apart from the still of her deck. They were loud, animated and every once in a while, they would gently ( Read more... )

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dot_codotzid_a December 11 2005, 19:06:53 UTC
I really liked that story. We'll talk sometime, maybe when I get back. We can get some pho and go see the christmas lights in San Francisco, and talk about the world.

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unclenikolai December 11 2005, 19:11:22 UTC
thank you. and we most definatly will.

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dot_codotzid_a January 7 2006, 23:34:17 UTC
I read your story again. What's great about it is it takes place over the course of about a minute, and it's about the places you've known. You're a good writer. You want to do lunch tommorow? I've been trying to reminisce lately .. but it's been hard for some reason.

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