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undying_desire

Gilded Cage

May 15, 2010 00:17

Title: Gilded Cage
Author: undying_desire
Pairing: GTOP Seunghyun/Jiyong
Rating: PG-13 (?)
Genre: one shot, fluff, angst
Summary: Seunghyun comes to realize that we can ever truly know a person.
Disclaimer: I don't own the members of Big Bang (as much as I wish I did.)

( Open the Cage )

genre: oneshot, pairing: gtop, fandom: big bang, fanfic

Comments 12

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undying_desire May 15 2010, 19:42:43 UTC

Awe thank you. Ji just couldn't stand the pressure anymore I suppose. *Tears* I'll try and do a happy ending for my next story. ^.^

atenais_pala May 15 2010, 23:17:23 UTC

Oh... Poor Ji. I wanted to know a lot of things... Was Ji in love with someone?
Please, a happy ending in the next story. ^^

undying_desire May 16 2010, 03:33:12 UTC

Mhm, Jiyong was in love with his rapper, TOP of course. ^.^ Maybe I should have made it clearer. Haha.

Happy ending. Will do captain! *Salutes*

akari_hayashi May 16 2010, 07:16:54 UTC

Sigh... If Seunghyun had picked up the clues from the poem, maybe he could have saved Jiyong. And things would have been different for both of them.

But then, the heart is a difficult thing to figure out.

undying_desire May 18 2010, 20:18:41 UTC

You're tempting me to do an alternate ending to this fic. xD

Ah yes, if only we could have a map guiding us around the various corners of others hearts.

akari_hayashi May 19 2010, 02:50:22 UTC

Do it chu~ <3

x_cky0cky_x May 25 2010, 08:14:12 UTC

aww It's rea~lly beautiful...
I like the poem...and the last line...It just made me....aghh
Really really beautiful

undying_desire May 26 2010, 20:50:21 UTC

I know seeing Jiyong so sad is hard to take. I'm glad you liked it though. ^.^

x_cky0cky_x May 27 2010, 04:40:44 UTC

^__^ but did SeungHyun realize that maybe just maybe Ji Liked him? Did he even notice all those strikethroughs on the pronoun...'him'? and the rapper Ji was talkin' about in the end of the poem.....was it SeungHyun?

undying_desire May 29 2010, 12:35:13 UTC

Oh yes he noticed. Seunghyun might have been slow at first but he'd have to be really dumb not to notice how obvious Ji was in that poem. xD

vanyelsfan4ev December 7 2010, 05:57:53 UTC

This was really nice and pretty and well written, but.. I truly was not expecting that death! o_O I understand why, and it didn't take away from the story at all, but it did really shock me!