Amrita

[undying_desire]

Title: Amrita
Author: undying_desire
Pairing: GTOP Seunghyun/Jiyong
Rating: PG-13
Genre: one-shot, tragedy
Summary: "I pulled the trigger on the gun I had aimed at my heart."
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Comments

[miracleshining]

This was a very fascinating variation on the concept of the original Greek mythos. I really enjoyed the general mood and overall atmosphere.

What caught me most about this piece though was the obvious differentiation between Jiyong and Seunghyun. I truly like stories where Seunghyun is much more reserved, it feels realistic to me in this sense. The slight "Frankenstein" feel of this work is also intriguing.

Once again, a fantastic piece of work, my dearest!

[undying_desire]

Aw, I'm glad you sat through this one. I can't believe how long it ended up being. *Cough*

I honestly hadn't got into the Adonis myth until I heard it referenced to so much in the community. Once I researched it, I just had to write. Haha, and I never thought of Frankenstein but it really does fit the story.

Thanks for reading, Miry! *Hugs*

[gdontop]

Oh, that was so good. The hurt/comfort/angst was just perfect, and the AU plot worked nicely in this one-shot. It was very easy to follow; you did a great job on the exposition. Thanks for sharing!

[undying_desire]

Thank you hun! I was worried about trying to create a whole different type of world. I'm glad it wasn't a complete and total failure.

And I really need to get caught up on your fanfics! I haven't been on LJ in a while. I missed so much.

[gdontop]

I find that those of us who read on a regular basis (even if it IS just fanfiction :P) have very vivid imaginations, and hugely detailed exposition of AU worlds isn't necessary. I mean, unless you're creating some alien world that is so totally different from our own that we'd all be sitting around going 'Whaaa?' if you didn't explain why the characters breathe nitrogen and cannibalize each other or something... Was that weird? That was weird, wasn't it? Anyway, what I mean to say is that your fic was the opposite of a complete and total failure, and I enjoyed it a lot.

As for *my* fics... Goodness, I feel like I've been dumping garbage all over g-top recently, but you're more than welcome to pick through that mess if you'd like :P

Welcome back to LJ!

[undying_desire]

That's true. ^.^ These fanfictions are amazing for expanding our imaginative ability! People always post things are so far out and it just makes you sit and think for a while. I'm really glad that it's like that though. xD Haha, and cannibalistic aliens would be very odd. . .interesting.

You must have had a burst of inspiration if you've been working so hard. And thanks for the welcome back but I'm not sure how long I'll be around. I tend to show up for a few days and vanish for months. *lol*

[sarahgr88]

i think this is one of my favorite stories that you have written, although i admit i wasn't that fond of the way it ended. But then again its always hard to enjoy the end of a good story.

[undying_desire]

Haha, I think I'll take that as a compliment since it's your favorite. xD It took a while to decide how to end it. And as you see, I settled on a kind of cycle of death and life. It was a bit rushed. T_T Thank you for reading, dear! ^^

++<3++

[ninevolt_doll]

woah. So Seunghyun brought Jiyong to life again...
I love it so much because I really felt the bleak atmosphere and the subtle beginnings of an affection. You really did great with your descriptions so thank you for writing another beautiful story :)

please do write more G-Top in the future :)

Re: ++<3++

[undying_desire]

Yup, Jiyong lives once again, which probably isn't the greatest thing. Poor baby.

I'm glad you could get the feel of the story! That means a lot. ^.^ Thank you so much.

Oh, and I will definitely keep writing GTOP.

spot!

[dyealer]

damn!
this is too good to be true..I can't even asdfjkasdfjkasdfjkasdfjk..
this is too good~ I need to re-read it again..
damn...

Re: spot!

[undying_desire]

Haha, I love your comments. They make me smile. xD I'm really glad you liked it so much even though it was so long! Thanks for reading, hun. ^.^