Star Dust (Jiyong/Seunghyun, PG)

Apr 28, 2012 22:39


Title: Star Dust
Characters: Jiyong/Seunghyun, Big Bang
Rating: PG for swearing 
Notes: I've never written Big Bang before, and I am not entirely happy with this, it's too melodramatic and too angsty for my liking, a bit too over the top, but - here, anyway.

Star Dust... )

music: jiyong kwon, music: seunghyun choi, music: big bang, rating: pg, pairing: gtop

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babochi May 12 2012, 18:44:19 UTC
That was amazing! So bittersweet, I have to read it again! Thank you for this.

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unembraced_fic May 14 2012, 12:55:32 UTC
thanks to you for reading! <3

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unembraced_fic May 14 2012, 12:59:42 UTC
since I'm new I haven't really had an opportunity to have a good look at/study into everyone!!! So I thought I couldn't write Seungri's character properly...I figured when they were doing all their seperate things they wouldn't all be together all the time anyway...if I ever edit this fic I'd probably add Seungri in, maknae is so funny in some of those talk show things! :\

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aeries_amethyst May 12 2012, 19:51:14 UTC
This was so heartbreakingly beautiful and amazing *sniffles*

I don't have enough words to describe my feelings but this definitely touched my heart :) Thank you for writing bb <3

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unembraced_fic May 14 2012, 13:25:22 UTC
Thank you for your wonderful comment! <3

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glass0skin May 13 2012, 01:47:45 UTC
holy fuck that was awesome. like... i can't even word a creative compliment, you did an amazing job and holy shit

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unembraced_fic May 14 2012, 13:25:40 UTC
wtaowehtowahtwe i love your comment it is awesome haha thank you :)

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atenais_pala May 13 2012, 03:05:14 UTC
Oh, this is beautiful! I loved their dialogue, when we could see so much going behind their mysterious words.

Your sense of beauty is amazing. coating their "day by day" with so many meanings.

GTOP isn't about romantic fantasies, and I believe what us, GTOP shippers, love most about them is their honest friendship.

Thank you for writing about them this beautiful way.

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unembraced_fic May 14 2012, 13:27:56 UTC
Oh, thank you so much for your wonderful comment, you seem to understand what I'm trying to convey, so thank you <3

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jiyonglikesme August 17 2012, 06:07:40 UTC
i love your comment unnie ^^

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atenais_pala August 17 2012, 13:16:02 UTC
Thank you, baby. But the story inspired me.

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