Star Dust (Jiyong/Seunghyun, PG)

[unembraced_fic]

Title: Star Dust
Characters: Jiyong/Seunghyun, Big Bang
Rating: PG for swearing 
Notes: I've never written Big Bang before, and I am not entirely happy with this, it's too melodramatic and too angsty for my liking, a bit too over the top, but - here, anyway.

Comments

WOW, Fantastic Baby~

[brainistheboss]

This is really beautiful <33333333333333 :D

I love how you added Seunghyun's thoughts in this! Write more, you're really good! :)

Re: WOW, Fantastic Baby~

[unembraced_fic]

Thank you!! Hope to write more soon :) Thanks again for reading!

wow~

[narusasu136]

this.was.brilliant! wow, I feel like re-reading this again and again and again... I love it! I really like the way you created their characters, their talks are simple but so real... I hope you write more GTOP in the future :)

Re: wow~

[unembraced_fic]

Thank you very much! Your comment means a lot <3

[jiyonglikesme]

i love how you portrait them through your story, it gave a sad feeling yet warm and smile at the same time. The story left this nice feeling inside me, you did good job. Thank you

[unembraced_fic]

Thank you so much :)