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Fic: So Let's Cause a Scene [Matt/Rachel]

Apr 15, 2010 14:00

Title: So Let's Cause a Scene [1/1]
Author: Unequivocally
Characters/Pairings: Matt/Rachel, mention of Puck/Rachel; Appearances by various Glee members
Rating: Pure, unadulterated fluff. PG
Word Count: 2,545
Spoilers: None
Summary: The Rumor Mill is quite efficient at McKinley High.
Disclaimer: I don't own Glee. No money is made, no infringement is intended.
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fluff, glee, fic, matt/rachel

Comments 14

smc_27 April 15 2010, 18:50:02 UTC

So, those who know me know that I love Matt WAY more than anyone should ever love a character who has never actually said a word. I seriously, seriously adore him. And I've been working on a little Matt/Rachel myself. I was so giddy it's embarrassing when I saw this on my friends page.

So amazing. I like that it was kind of a light bulb moment, where he was just like "Huh. Guess I'll ask her out." Very cute. And the reaction from the rest of the club was great, too, especially Mercedes (who I usually can't stand, especially in fic).

I also loved the little moment between him and Mike. Totally the way dudes think about stuff like that.

Amazing. Thanks for writing this! (And look! I even have an icon for this!)

unequivocally April 29 2010, 22:51:22 UTC

WOW Late reply, I fail so hard! Anyways!

Thanks so much for reading! =) I had a lot of trouble with this because we know SO LITTLE about Matt, but I was trying to bank on the fact that he's obviously friends with Puck to build on his character.

ANYWAYS. Thanks so much for the comment! =)

nicolasamaria April 15 2010, 22:59:59 UTC

YAY!
I feel like I've been waiting for this for years.
And it was totally worth the wait.

It's so fluffy, I love it.
♥

You deserve a more detailed review, but I'll have to leave it after I've re-read this about ten more times.
:)

unequivocally April 29 2010, 22:51:52 UTC

Late reply is LATE!

Yes, it HAS been a long time, huh?! lolol Sorry for making you wait so long, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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unequivocally April 29 2010, 22:52:03 UTC

Glad you liked it. =)

fuzzy_paint April 16 2010, 01:30:51 UTC

AWWW! SO CUTE!

There is a silence and he can't quite tell if it's awkward. I giggled indecently hard.

They dodge the flow of students effortlessly, and when they can't, he shoves a freshman out of his way despite the soft sigh of disappointment it elicits from Finn. OH FINN! I love that he's all disappointed when Matt/Puck/whoever picks on people.

It's wonderfully done, and I was smiling the entire way through except the part where I frowned massively at Puck, but what can you do

Now I really wish we knew more about Matt. <3

unequivocally April 29 2010, 22:57:35 UTC

Late reply! =(

Thanks so much for reading! <3 I'm so glad you liked it.

And me too! I think that Matt really needs some lines. =( He makes me so happy when he dances.

♥

anonymous April 16 2010, 02:46:01 UTC

Matt/Rachel fluff with a side of Puck! <3

He wonders how she always sounds so airy all the time
I think this too ! I adore Britt.

At first, he considered not saying anything, but then he thought back to one of her many we're a team/family/club/social allies speeches and figured, hell, maybe he should say something.
Aww....he listened....

(Not after that practice a few months ago when they both stumbled into the choir room late; Rachel's skirt was on backwards and Puck's belt was suddenly missing and the both of them were breathless. Add in the giant love bite below Rachel's ear, and even Brittany understood what was going on.)
Hee! so bad....*wiggles eyebrows*

Its kinda cute that despite reports from Puck and Mercedes that Rachel's crazy, he doesn't think so......yet lol.