fic | if you could take all the heat in your heart

[unevenfootsteps]

if you could take all the heat in your heart | harry/louis & zayn/liam. | nc - 17. | 5,500. | “Can you hear the ocean?” Louis asks, combing his fingers through Harry’s tangled curls. They smell of peppermint and mango. / “No,” Harry sighs. “I can just hear you.” | warning: slight D/s relationship/undertones, body paint. | Hope you all enjoy. Sorry

Comments

[grandnature04]

That was amazing. It gave me so many feels!! Seriously wonderful! A+

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much!

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much! i really wanted to show how opposite louis and harry are in this fic, and i'm glad it came off that way pretty nicely.

[colazitron]

*pathetic whimper*

Oh, but this is beautiful. I absolutely adore how intricate it is and how bone-deep and sweet and difficult and co-dependent in the most lovely way and. I don't even really have words.

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much! not having any words is the nicest thing someone can have when it comes to writing. glad you enjoyed.

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much! glad you enjoyed. :3

[quietgalaxy]

the entire atmosphere of this fic was so wonderful and really adds to the story. Even though Louis removes Harry's insecurities, Louis is afraid that Harry will leave him.

I would write more, but my brain's being weird and slow right now.

Great job, as usual. :)

[unevenfootsteps]

thank you so much, i'm so glad you picked up on the insecurities thing, as well. thank you for reading!