fic | if you could take all the heat in your heart

Apr 23, 2012 19:32

if you could take all the heat in your heart | harry/louis & zayn/liam. | nc - 17. | 5,500. | “Can you hear the ocean?” Louis asks, combing his fingers through Harry’s tangled curls. They smell of peppermint and mango. / “No,” Harry sighs. “I can just hear you.” | warning: slight D/s relationship/undertones, body paint. | Hope you all enjoy. Sorry ( Read more... )

harry styles/louis tomlinson, one direction, zayn malik/liam payne

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goldenskies April 25 2012, 01:03:52 UTC
this is actually beautiful
i usually like to quote my favorite lines but i cant even choose here everything was so lovely

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unevenfootsteps April 25 2012, 22:45:52 UTC
thank you so much! it's such a compliment that you couldn't pick, really, haha.

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kurobaa April 25 2012, 06:33:14 UTC
wow. just wow.

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unevenfootsteps April 25 2012, 22:46:39 UTC
thank you so much. :3

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unevenfootsteps April 25 2012, 23:15:42 UTC
thank you so much!

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mathab April 25 2012, 20:40:19 UTC
I'd never cried simply because something was written so beautifully until this. I want to quote it on twitter and write lines from it down on paper so I won't forget them. You write like it's poetry and it has rendered me almost speechless. I just simply want to say thank you for writing and sharing it.

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unevenfootsteps April 25 2012, 23:16:04 UTC
thank you so much! i'm so glad you enjoyed my writing style. :3

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arcadianmaggie April 25 2012, 20:55:21 UTC
Lovely. Thank you!

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unevenfootsteps April 25 2012, 23:17:12 UTC
no, thank you! thank you for reading.

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