fic | if you could take all the heat in your heart

[unevenfootsteps]

if you could take all the heat in your heart | harry/louis & zayn/liam. | nc - 17. | 5,500. | “Can you hear the ocean?” Louis asks, combing his fingers through Harry’s tangled curls. They smell of peppermint and mango. / “No,” Harry sighs. “I can just hear you.” | warning: slight D/s relationship/undertones, body paint. | Hope you all enjoy. Sorry

Comments

[mab_di]

This was heartstoppingly beautiful. The thought of them growing in each other - the ways that you connect them - I felt it so strongly. Even when it's happy it's tinged with melancholy because it's almost too much. Gorgeous. And it's also a love song to NYC, which is my home - a home I miss terribly. You did an amazing job capturing the energy of the city without overly describing it. You're an artist! Thank you so much. This was a gift.

[skiptothelu]

Wow, this was breathtaking. I love you wrote it, so simple, yet so deep, telling an elegant tale. Wonderful job.

[love_wilts]

how in the world did i fucking miss this because my god

you are just magificent. you are. i have no other words except oh my fucking god who is this woman and how did she write this way.

you are predictable in your beauty, but spontaenous in how you potray it. i mean, every time i read something i know it's going to gorgeous, with lots of prose and poem and quiet, underrated love that speaks volumes - but the way it's displayed always takes me by complete surprise i sort of lose myself in your story.

the d/s themes are so beautiful and so underwhelming, i just love it. you took the raunchiness out of them, you made it more about louis and harry and how they function, two parts of one whole, and why am i even surprised that you're able to do something like that. because it's you, and elizabeth, i'm terribly sick on the lovely aches you give me. each and every time ,you words hit me like hail. i can't even.

gah

“You’ve grown so much,” Louis whispers against Harry’s lips

[colfields]

They usually settle on lovers who want to pass their stories on, because Harry is a romantic and Louis is Harry’s.

that part was so aching sweet. You've created this beautiful world for Harry and Louis and I can clearly see them living through all this and doing all these things. Really wonderfully done. You have a gorgeous voice when you write and this is really just lovely to read.

[ellekinss]

this was honestly stunning. you are so talented