(the dust of ages) chapter one: time stops

[unfinishedline]

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 1/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question was this: if they

Comments

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

Oh, that was really good. Excellent start. I like how you're using other people's perspectives to characterize Claire so far. I thought that was done well.

[shimmeree]

That's some beautiful colouring on that icon. Did you make it?

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

I wish I did, heh. It is very pretty, no? It's by sinelinea.

[sinverguenza]

oh good, im glad that part worked. its a little odd, but i like the effect. thanks for reading :)

[ronniekins77]

Oh, so great to read something else by you! I agree with the previous commenter about loving the fact that you're characterizing Claire through other people. :)

She's pregnant, isn't she? OH GOD. Poor thing.

Can't wait to see where this goes. <333

[sinverguenza]

what a nice thing to say! thank you :)

and, um...read the next chapter. heh.

[ronniekins77]

Oh, you're welcome. You definitely deserve it.

Ooh, another chap! *scuttles off to read*

[shimmeree]

EEEE! Suspense! I can't wait to read more!

[sinverguenza]

yay, glad you liked!

[sinverguenza]

i hope you won't be disappointed :)

[ladycat713]

Interesting start.

[sinverguenza]

thank ye.