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(the dust of ages) chapter four: hide and seek

Jul 23, 2007 18:48

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 4/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question ( Read more... )

fandom: heroes, fic: the dust of ages, pairing: peter/claire

Comments 29

frellingblonde July 24 2007, 01:20:27 UTC

Oh god, the ANGST. She wasn't raped, was she? Because I seriously could not handle reading that. :(

Still, very well done despite the angst. I love your writing style.

sinverguenza July 25 2007, 05:45:50 UTC

im such a sucker for angst :( truly ive been trying to rope it in lately.

and thank you, so much for the compliment. and for reviewing.

frellingblonde July 25 2007, 13:26:37 UTC

*notices you didn't answer her question* Uh-oh...do I need to stop reading this fic, or am I just being paranoid? *nervous*

sinverguenza July 25 2007, 20:48:13 UTC

paranoid ;) no raping, i promise.

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sinverguenza July 25 2007, 05:47:21 UTC

i thought long and hard about what to name claire's baby. im so glad you agree that daniel is a good choice.

as for the fascinating plot points you put forth...i dare not speak on them. lol. thanks so much for the review. also, dont go insane!

kastellen July 25 2007, 14:59:47 UTC

This is exactly what my theory has been. I must go read the next part and see if there are any more clues!

karanina July 24 2007, 02:46:10 UTC

AWWW man!!! I really wanna know who the father is and how she got pregnant!!!!!

Still, I'm enjoying the story along the way!

sinverguenza July 25 2007, 05:47:50 UTC

glad your interest is piqued! thanks for dropping a review by :)

joanna_484 July 24 2007, 02:53:02 UTC

Oh, my. The part with Claire and her newborn baby at the hospital was just lovely. Your description of Daniel Noah and everyone's reaction to him was simply beautiful *sigh*

I have to say, I have a hard time thinking of Nathan as a father or Peter as a great-uncle, for that matter *lol* They're both so young and vital :D

The whole "Who's the father?" question is so compelling. Or is "How is Peter the father?" a better one?... Awesome chap! Looking forward to the next!

sinverguenza July 25 2007, 05:50:59 UTC

i know! wouldnt it be odd indeed to see nathan as a granddaddy? this fic is set in the future, of course, but only 4 years. they cant age THAT much. but its totally plausible...

glad youre looking forward to the next chap! its up now :)

tju_tju_tju_tju July 24 2007, 02:53:25 UTC

I love love love love it xinfinity. YOU KICK ASS.

Favorite part: Bennet turned to goo, quite literally, as soon as he laid eyes on his grandson. It was odd to see such a large, stoic man nearly cowed by the tiny face that peeked out of a red blanket. And Claire’s mother was over the moon, frantically ordering them to use antiseptic gel every three seconds.

BECAUSE THAT WOULD SO TOTALLY HAPPEN!

sinverguenza July 25 2007, 05:51:38 UTC

heee, that scene may or may not have been one that i myself witnessed with similar people in my life. lol! so glad youre liking it, thanks for always reviewing.