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(the dust of ages) chapter six: dirty business

Jul 25, 2007 15:52

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 6/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question ( Read more... )

fandom: heroes, fic: the dust of ages, pairing: peter/claire

Comments 28

michelsita July 26 2007, 00:58:09 UTC

*thud*
Seems like the only reaction I have when it comes to this story.
Sorry my brain is still recovering from that out of the world chapter...

sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:39:26 UTC

*thud* is always a nice reaction! thank you so much for reviewing.

leap_at_sun July 26 2007, 01:00:01 UTC

OMG IT'S FUTURE PETER! Or not. You know, either way as long as it is Peter all is good. And this is really getting nice and intricate.

sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:40:08 UTC

this review made me lol. and your icon too <3

leap_at_sun July 28 2007, 04:17:33 UTC

Glad to be of service.

stellaann July 26 2007, 02:02:46 UTC

I KNEW IT! I knew it was some future!Peter. (right?)

Gar! I need the next chapter now, please.

Danny is adorable...he is just the sweetest little thing. I found this on deviantart and the baby on the right looks just like how I imagine him to look.

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sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:41:07 UTC

haha, aww, cute picture. i see daniel as being a mini-jason-from-superman-returns in my mind, but yes! certainly!

new chappie is up. and thanks so much for all the great reviews last night ;)

frellingblonde July 26 2007, 02:21:23 UTC

Danny’s eyes would always widen with pleasure when he saw Peter. His feet would excitedly stamp up and down and his hands would rise, asking to be picked up.

Aww! See that? Babies are geniuses, they always know exactly who Mommy and Daddy are.

Yeah, I think we're all in the same boat as Peter. Need more info! Soon?

sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:41:34 UTC

babies are indeed geniuses, i agree!

and the new chap is up ;)

dragonydreams July 26 2007, 04:07:21 UTC

So it was future!Peter. Good. I absolutely loved Peter's reactions in this chapter; his complete denial. Can't wait for the story!!!!!!!

sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:42:03 UTC

denial!peter is probably my favorite peter to write. so glad you're liking this!