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unfinishedline

(the dust of ages) chapter six: dirty business

Jul 25, 2007 15:52

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 6/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question ( Read more... )

fandom: heroes, fic: the dust of ages, pairing: peter/claire

Comments 28

ladycat713 July 26 2007, 04:16:31 UTC

I was right! (and i would've commented on the last two chapters but I just caught up with them).

I'm betting that she was happy about the haircut because she knew it meant he was going to go back soon and knock her up.

Neat as hell that Bennet is the one that figured it out. If he figured out that it was time traveling Peter that got her pregnant and that to object would mean that his grandson wouldn't exist then it's no wonder he got drunk.

Great updates.

sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:42:48 UTC

i think bennet is the only one who has a sick enough mind to go there. besides peter and claire of course ;)

thanks for the review!

quadrophenia718 July 26 2007, 12:52:13 UTC

I thought that this chapter was particularly heartbreaking. I love Peter's slow realization that he is Daniel's father; the gradual breakdown of denial - 'cause that's what it was, really - was so well depicted. I love Claire's delivery of the news, too. The following lines were probably my favorite ( ... )

sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:44:56 UTC

thanks again for such a thoughtful review. i really love to get them.

so glad that line didnt come off odd or too slutty. i mean, i dont know, i thought it fit but im a rather sick person.

hoep you like the next chap!

rtwofan July 26 2007, 16:45:35 UTC

Eeeeeiii! (I think I've started all my reviews with either 'AhhH!' or *squee*! haven't I?) So I had a feeling it was his son (this is a Paire story and all) but now I'm actually having doubts if it's Future!Peter. I mean...probably? Or Peter was a sperm donor in another life?

Still on the edge of my seat,hon, even if the secret has been-revealed-but-not-really, heh.

sinverguenza July 27 2007, 00:46:06 UTC

i dearly love that you are into the story this much! your ideas are interesting! spermdonor!peter with singlemom!claire is a total crackfic waiting to be written :)

rtwofan July 27 2007, 16:54:57 UTC

I know, right! That would be so original and would be like, accidental incest, hehe. If Peter donated sperm to a really dingy bank and Claire went there and, since she had a secret longing for Peter, wrote down his characteristics for the father, and they ended up knocking her up with him? HA! If I wasn't so busy, I'd write that =)