(the dust of ages) chapter thirteen: butterfly

[unfinishedline]

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 13/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question

Comments

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

Oh, that was amazing. Simply amazing. The sex scene was so beautifully written. And I love how Right Now Peter keeps on insisting that he can't time travel when it's very clear that he can...silly Peter. ^_~

Can't wait for the next chapter!

[sinverguenza]

oh, i'm so glad you liked it! the sex scenes are supposed to be good payoff for enduring the angst, lol, so im glad you didnt feel cheated.

dust of ages ch. 13

[anonymous]

First off I was wrong. She didn't get pregnante at her graduation. If Peter can't then how the heck did this all happen? (rhetorical question LOL) He just needs to have a little faith in himself.
Cant wait for more! I am glad I found this on here or i would still be stuck on ch. 7 back on FF.net

Re: dust of ages ch. 13

[sinverguenza]

ugh, i know...i realised a couple days ago that i had completely forgotten to update this thing over there. i will though, eventually. in either case, its good you found this, since i hardly post anything over there anyway.

[nayden]

Absolutely gorgeous, can't imagine what the last 2 chappies will be like ^_^

[sinverguenza]

i hope you'll like them. the new chap is up now!

[rtwofan]

Aw, that last line was cute. I also loved “You made me trust you, and you told me to follow my instincts. It kept me alive, you know - it’s what made me run to New York…it’s what made me do everything. I’d have probably died if I’d stayed in Odessa during that time.”

That makes so much SENSE, and totally explains why Claire trusted him so much automatically. And, I agree with the above comment; the love scene...just guh girl! It was so sensual and romantic and the culmination of everything!

*fangirlage over*

Can't wait to see what happens in the next two chapters between RightNow!Paire. *dances*

[sinverguenza]

hee! well, i talk about it more in the next chapter, and i talk about it in the notes i'm going to post after this is all over, but...yes! it does make sense, doesnt it!

im glad you like this :)

[joanna_484]

I'm very glad that Peter and Claire waited until Claire was ready to sleep together. As it happened, she seemed ready for the experience :)

The way you brought together the 2 narratives was amazing :) I wonder if Right Now Peter will try to alter the past so that Danny was never born...

Love this story, but it's so sad that it's almost over...

[sinverguenza]

yep, its important for paire that claire be totally ready, i think :) thanks so much for reading, and i am happy you liked this!