(the dust of ages) chapter fourteen: i know it's over

[unfinishedline]

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 14/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question

Comments

[shimmeree]

This has been so great. I can't wait to read the last chap, but at the same time it sucks that it's going to end! You've made such a beautiful story. :)

(I hope you get your muse back soon!)

[sinverguenza]

i wrote a little paire drabble last night, it felt nice. i think the muse is just on vacation, lol.

and thank you!

[elliesmeow]

I'm sure Peter will not choose to let Danny not exist. How can he take that little life away from everyone?

Have fun with your book. Looking forward to the next(*sobs*) last part.

-Ellie

[sinverguenza]

hehe. peter is pretty much a softy, isnt he? next chap is up, hope you like it!

[leap_at_sun]

I somehow got the belief that Danny is going to copy Peter's handwriting and write that note himself. Which, considering that you actually have a plot and not my mind, probably won't happen. But it's still a cool thought.

Peter thinking that Claire is beautiful as an old lady is touching. I don't find old people particularly beautiful myself, but it is still nice.

[sinverguenza]

that is indeed an interesting idea. and how can you not find old people beautiful! i love their faces. so full of life experience. but i digress, that line was in there more or less to show how peter feels about claire and the commitment he's wanting to make, heh.

[karanina]

hmmm maybe no death, that'd make me a hypocrite, since I find myself very easily distracted from writing duties when I buy myself other books...

I love Peter's perspective in this chapter. You've tied it all together very nicely.

But I really can't wait to read his perspective on the last chapter!

[sinverguenza]

hmm, well theres not really peter POV in the last chap, but i think we certainly see into his mind. thanks for reviewing!

[dragonydreams]

I loved the chicken/egg question in relation to Peter and Claire's situation. Her Future Peter is finally Right Now Peter, who is meeting Past Claire. Of course, I love that he learns that he doesn't really want to change the course of the past, the more time he spends with Past Claire.

[sinverguenza]

indeed, indeed. you've really understood what i'm trying to say in this fic from the beginning. thank you.