(the dust of ages) chapter fourteen: i know it's over

[unfinishedline]

Title: The Dust of Ages
Author: missaliceblue
Pairing: Peter/Claire. Written for eowyn_girl.
Rating: R for themes, language, some adult situations. But mostly themes.
Status: 14/15. I’ve written the whole thing already, and will try to update daily.
Summary: Peter and Claire were both caught up in this crazy, never-ending circle a long time ago. The real question

Comments

[comiskey]

I love how Claire is the catalyst for Peter being about to use Hiro's power. So sweet. I agree with everyone else that it's really cool to see how visting Past Claire has a maturing effect on Peter. It's interesting to read the change between Peter's insistence that he'll change events and how he's now hesitating and lied to Claire that only she could change things. It was very fun reading the time travel events from Peter's point of view. Looking forward to the final chapter!

[sinverguenza]

glad that you liked this chap and that the differing POVs werent too hard to follow. thanks for the review!

[nayden]

This fics driving me loopy, but in the every best way. It's really something else and so beautiful, you're one of the writers we all aspire to be :D Can't believe there's just one more to go *pout*

[sinverguenza]

oh, you flatter me. thank you :) so much.