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[unknownwysper]

I stand still, once again opening my eyes. My surroundings have changed. The atmosphere was comforting, yet now it's become unbearable. The chill settles on my skin while the cold infiltrates my veins. I have nothing in which I can see myself with, but I don't need to. The color is flushing from my face. I wasn't... I'm not prepared for this.

Comments

[luvjessi143]

Hey sry hun that you have some bad issues in your life right now. I don't know exactly what they are but if you want to tell me and talk to me about them then you are definitely welcome to me ears. Call me and I will also see you later.
Always Monkeys Girl,
Jessica

[unknownwysper]

There's nothing for you, or anyone but myself for that matter, to worry about. Hope you had fun chillin' with Bri. night.

[unholy_zahrim]

Im not a mind reader, and Im sorry I havent been keeping my journal up to date... nothing happened until just recently. I cant understand whats going on because Im not a mind reader or a even sure as to whats happened. =\ Im sorry hun... I love you... XoX hope to talk with you soon.

[unknownwysper]

Feeling a bit redundant tonight?
Anyway, I never claimed you were a mind reader. You have no need to be sorry. I'll talk to you tomorrow...sometime after SATs and working on my grandparents big yard. (damn Land Scaping...)

[unholy_zahrim]

Yea I was really tired that day... and prolly not thinking straight. Sorry bout that. The writing was as always great and well written. Nicely thought out and all the other stuff. *is just playing with ya*
I love you hun. Hope the landscaping went well. Ciao

[aroseforanangel]

I didn't really understand that, but feel better Lauren. =)

[unknownwysper]

Hmm, thanks for the sentiment..

Hmm

[vegason123]

I know a thing or two about having pride and being stubborn to a degree of hatred. Yeah your sad, you lost a thing or two, but keeping a shell from being hurt only destroys you. But feat not, you have not lost all. You know that but still you have lost a lot, but life moves on and new habitats come about. And yes, that paragraph is very good under the circumstances of writing purposes.

Re: Hmm

[unknownwysper]

my writing is exaggerated. damnit. does no one understand this? I don't need lectures on life, I'm perfectly stable and grounded. Thanks for the attempt.. but I have no need for it.
Thanks.
(sorry if that seemed snappish towards you David, but it's not only to you, and I'm in a snappish mood) O.o

[llsourskittlell]

You said to write about the poem, not about you, so the truth is, I thought it was very good. It is poetic so i had to break it down a little, and I can relate to it. Reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe, lol..except you kept the metaphors and big words to a minimum for those of us with smaller vocabulary, because i know you are like a dictionary. Good work, x0x.