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baxaphobia October 30 2008, 10:02:40 UTC
Interesting read.

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____hejira October 30 2008, 14:21:37 UTC
Different. Without much background or surrounding context I'm not sure how I feel about it as a stand alone work. Great writing as always though.

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unsold_capacity October 30 2008, 14:59:32 UTC
Yeah...the more I wrote the more I realized I would have to write, and I'm not sure how much I like how fragmented it ended up being.

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darkprism October 30 2008, 15:46:41 UTC
I liked this - enjoyed the different formatting, the hints to a larger plot, etc. I found it subtle and creepy. I'd like to know more about the background, etc., and maybe some more journal entries/conversation among characters, but this is LJ Idol, not LJ Novel. :P I understand why you did it this way.

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unsold_capacity October 30 2008, 16:17:14 UTC
I'm rather tempted to do nanowrimo with this, but I know I don't have the time. Perhaps it will become a long term project, though :)

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brightflashes October 30 2008, 20:25:01 UTC
I really enjoyed the different format with this, as others have said. It's a risk that I believe works. Great job! :)

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unsold_capacity October 30 2008, 21:01:17 UTC
Thank you! :D

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lilmissmagic71 October 30 2008, 22:09:37 UTC
In my case, this sort of thing fascinates me to no end... I will now be looking it all up and reading it for each detail.. I loved your format... This was a great read for me!

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unsold_capacity October 31 2008, 00:52:55 UTC
Ohh, I made it all up though...! I wish it was real :) I do really want to continue it some time, I'll let you know. Thanks!!

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lilmissmagic71 October 31 2008, 01:02:28 UTC
WOw... so believable (in that paranormal unbelievable way LOL)... well then, now you must make up all the further details for me to discover... *grin*

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