Beginnings - JESUS (11/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - JESUS (11/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 4,146 (69,000ish total

Comments

[mind_cell]

AWWWWWWWW!!!!! *sobs uncontrollably into her scraps of Kleenex*

XDD

Just what are your motives, You???? Right now you're behaving like a teenage girl who never loved and thus does not know how to distinguish love from affection. Argh... On the other hand, maybe, since it's friendship-turned-love, it may be confusing...

But the kiss scene was so sweet, so delicate, AND SO SEXY. And again, very natural, together with their reactions and everything. OMG i will die before Wednesday comes!

[unwritten_ideas]

I'm sure You has his own reasons for his reaction and confusion.

If you die before Wednesday you'll never see how it all ends!

[for_th3_written]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh SNAP.

[unwritten_ideas]

*nods*

C'mon boys, sort yourselves out!

[ann456]

Oh how I wish it was wednesday tomorrow having to wait sooo long is hard,this is such a good story and really well written.Thankyou!

[unwritten_ideas]

It'll soon be Wednesday!

Thanks for reading.

[gabba_camui]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!! *runs in circles* the kiss was so well written!!!
For the first time I don´t want to kick them, I was expecting that G will react more...dramatic but no, his answer was...mature and full of resignation.

Well done sweetie *0*
I can´t wait till Wednesday >_

[unwritten_ideas]

Thank you.

Gackt probably could have been more dramatic but I think you're right in that he's kinda resigned already to what he thinks is happening. Aww.

[shyone05]

Awwww...

"One day, you're going to wake up. When you do, don't fuck it up." Do I see a glimpse of dawn peeking over the horizon?

[unwritten_ideas]

Oh, I do hope so! Only four parts left... they need to get their act together soon.