and it's all that I've got

Jul 18, 2005 18:38

sorry about that other entry guys ( Read more... )

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miscetc July 19 2005, 03:51:34 UTC
I liked the first poem until the last two lines. Up until then it was pretty cool.

Yay! Emilys still here!

Going to UD, yes?
Come visit me all the time, I'm close.

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hey you, living for tomorrow ur_worth_it July 19 2005, 13:53:36 UTC
heck yes I'll visit all the time.
except this time when I get lost, I'll hafta wander around on foot cuz I won't have a car with me on campus.

yeah the last 2 lines is what the poem was all about, but I agree with you..it just doesn't sound right. I shoiuld edit it and put something else there that sounds pretty and less retarded.

I love you Caitlyn!

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