It's my last week of classes for the quarter, so I wanted to get this out before the madness ensues. Message to all of you now silent feedbackers: Stop it, please. Thank you.
I think a lot of people would agree with you that Kat's the better friend between she and Jonica (Monica?)
I think when it comes to Ashley in this story, there's what she's doing and what she thinks the motivation is and then there's what she's doing and what the actual motivation is. In case the audience isn't able to pick up on it because I haven't written it properly, then Kat's usually good about clarifying the actualities.
Silent feedbacker for the last like two chapters here. Sorry, I don't review a lot, so I forget to for the stories I actually want to comment on. I'm not a good reviewer by any means, and the only really thing I have to say is that I love the story, and I do a happy dance every time you update. Also, this line kind of made me a think a little: "Instead, I become transfixed on the way Spencer keeps her right hand on her heart while she leans into Robin and it seems like some sort of precaution." Anyway, keep up the amazing work! :)
I'm not one of those people who won't friend people unless they comment or who demands feedback or asks for it constantly--but, every once in awhile, I like to hear the opinion of the silent readers. So, thanks for indulging me.
Glad you're reading it, and glad you're liking it. Comment whenever you see fit!
I really really like this chapter. I love how Ashley just doesnt realize that everything going on around her is just a response to Spencer, even when Kat tells her exactly that! Hopefully you can update soon!
Good to read that you liked it. I quite liked it myself, actually. And yes, Ashley has a lot of self-analysis to do, but I'm sure having Kat around will expedite that process.
well, we'll just have to see if the yearbook will surface....or not. I kinda understand where ashley is coming from. I'm glad she has kat who is more level headed, blunt but pretty wise, playing the bestfriend role really well. at least, to her. I'm also glad that her date, tara is understanding and nice...for now. seeing spencer's hand keeping close to her heart can mean a lot of things but most importantly, it gives some sorta hope for ashley. anyway, I'm still waiting for spencer to meet kat tho. thanks for updating and loved this chapter :)
Good. That's EXACTLY the effect I'm after. I don't want people to have a favorite or anything. I want you to constantly be battling over whose head you want to be in for each chapter. If that's working, then awesome.
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I think when it comes to Ashley in this story, there's what she's doing and what she thinks the motivation is and then there's what she's doing and what the actual motivation is. In case the audience isn't able to pick up on it because I haven't written it properly, then Kat's usually good about clarifying the actualities.
Glad you're enjoying it!
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Update soon. Swear.
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