[Fic] KuroFai

[uwahblood]

Title: Connection
Characters: Kurogane, Fai
Summary: During the one shot chapter of xxxHolic after everything is over. SPOILERS.
Word Count: 1,335
Rating: PG-15 - there are sexual references but it's nothing explicit, it's mostly them talking.
Warnings: SPOILERSSSSSSS. I really can't say this enough.

Comments

[electricsong]

♥

[uwahblood]

♥ Why hello there you :P

[tokyoblackbird]

very zen ^^ I too would swish the sake in my cup
but oh Fai thinks too much lol
this was interesting.

to improve, cut out unnecessary words like "for a moment," which you use a lot. you don't need to describe every thing they do, only the significant actions.

but this was very sweet ^^ a lovely moment! do keep writing :D

[uwahblood]

I probably won't for this series as I come back to it every so often, but thank you!

Writing that way is my style though, more than anything, so I probably won't end up making changes like that. Thank you for the tip, regardless though! ♥

This was mostly a need to write something down when I finished xxxHolic finally - something like half a year after actually finishing TRC. orz.

Thanks again!