Ghosts in Attics III, Chapter 3

Jan 20, 2010 16:54

TITLE: Ghosts in Attics III, Chapter 3
FANDOM: Star Trek TOS
CHARACTERS/PAIRING: Spock/McCoy, Kirk, OC
TABLE: # 8 - Miscellaneous B
PROMPT: 03. Answers
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 6126
WARNINGS: Mentions of torture.
SUMMARY: Taking McCoy back from the mirror universe was the first step. Kirk, Spock and the others find out that it was also the ( Read more... )

fandom: star trek, * story: ghosts in attics, medium: story, table: misc b

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spikeface January 20 2010, 18:37:30 UTC
So many hard hits in this one. I'm assuming that the last resort Spock has is to somehow shift McCoy's bond to himself, and can't wait to see how that plays out (or what his plan actually is, if I'm wrong). I love the way Bones is caught between two worlds, and the last bit in his POV made me shiver. So, so excited for more.

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vail_kagami January 21 2010, 18:52:36 UTC
You're really close there!

I hope I can write more soon. Real life is a bit of a bitch at the moment.

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vail_kagami January 21 2010, 18:53:52 UTC
Well, the thoughts weren't exactly his own, rather those of his Mirror!self. But still.
It's going to be a while befor things really can get better.

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firstlaw January 20 2010, 20:04:07 UTC
OUch, that last line borught me down! So the bond with MSpock is being activated again? Poor Bones really! I remember you said there was a lot of hardship coming, and well, seen how the poor guy is doing now, what else can he go through?

BUrke is a danger in her duty oriented yet a bit arrogant stance that she is the only one who is not blinded by friendship, and I don't want to think what would happen to poor Bones if Starfleet intelligence gets wind of the other universe and Bones' foray there.. (almost a year, it made me shiver!) And what's wrong with Scotty? And.. well, so many things here, but I really really enjoyed Spock's conversation with Burke. Was perfect, I think. Congratulations again.

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vail_kagami January 21 2010, 18:57:24 UTC
I never meant for Burke to be a sort of villain in this fic, and in a way she's right, or at least it's obvious why she would think so. Also, she's pretty left out there, so she can't be blamed for not understanding what no one explains to her.
Still, you're right, she's going to be a problem eventually. Though perhaps one the others could have avoided.

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you still like it.

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sawyersparrow January 20 2010, 20:53:57 UTC
Poor Bones! I just want to give him lots of hugs and go to the Mirror!Verse and beat up Spock and Kirk.

But Bones hurting yourself isn't going to make things better in the long run.

Amazing update, am loving this fic and am eagerly waiting for more! Love it.

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vail_kagami January 21 2010, 18:58:02 UTC
Thank you! I hope I get some time to write soon.

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ntjnke January 20 2010, 21:23:04 UTC
Grrrrr.

I so want to read this but my boss keeps walking by. The temptation is painful.

Come on 6pm!

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vail_kagami January 21 2010, 19:22:51 UTC
Aw, isn't that annoying? I wanted to look at a NSFW picspam today, but the repair guys kept working right behind me. I know how you feel.

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