Comments | vail_kagami: To Dust and Ashes

vail_kagami

To Dust and Ashes

Dec 06, 2007 23:30

Rating: NC-17
Prompt: #060 - Relief
Claim: The Time War
Table: Here
Spoilers: Season 3 Finale
Warning: shady consent, torture, character death
Characters/Pairing: Jack/Doctor (10), Simm!Master/Doctor, TARDIS/Doctor
Summary: Sequel to Catch 22. In the end it all comes down to Jack and a gun.

( Eventually the Doctor begins to fear the times when the Master is away more than his presence. )

medium: story, doctor who era: tenth doctor, fandom: doctor who, table: time war, # series: the spoils of war

Comments 12

sandssavvy December 7 2007, 00:41:42 UTC

Poor Jack and Doctor.

The ending totally shocked me.

This fic has been amazing.

debart December 7 2007, 02:20:18 UTC

Ooof! What a tale! That was a fantastic ending. How perfectly fitting for the Master to have the ending the way it did. Love your stories.Absolutely, I do.

Thank you.

Deb.

quazonic December 7 2007, 02:37:50 UTC

Wasn't expecting that AT ALL. Brilliant! :D I really liked how you explained (and justified!) everyone's actions. Completely twisted, but it made sense.

plingo_kat December 7 2007, 05:23:18 UTC

Oh gods, that was GORGEOUS. I'm speechless and utterly horrified (in a good way, of course) at how this turned out. Poor Jack! You've stirred up my Jack!sympathy.

Now I have to go write something nice and happy for him. There goes my Master!empathy...

You capture their voices so beautifully, though. Well done!

plingo_kat December 7 2007, 19:41:25 UTC

Whew!

And thank heaven you screwed the Master but good.

robotinhiding December 7 2007, 19:52:36 UTC

Oh My God. Wow. That was such an amazing ending. I was beginning to lose hope the doctor would ever be able to just be in peace. Jack's emotions were fantastic.

Aww, wow. I'm supposed to go out now but I might just read it again! xxxx