Fic: Truth and Consequences - LOTS - PG
Title: Truth and Consequences
Rating: PG
Summary: Right side THIGH INJURY!
A/N: I BLAME virkatjol and virkatjol FOR THIS so it's for them. DO I GET DAY 2 NOW? Good grief. ALSO TY to paperscout and pickgems for the beta and morgenwrites again for fixing that one really horrible runon!
( THIGGHHHHSSS )
Rating: PG
Summary: Right side THIGH INJURY!
A/N: I BLAME virkatjol and virkatjol FOR THIS so it's for them. DO I GET DAY 2 NOW? Good grief. ALSO TY to paperscout and pickgems for the beta and morgenwrites again for fixing that one really horrible runon!
( THIGGHHHHSSS )
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This is so, so lovely bb! The way you write is just so pretty, also your style, with the total lack of words until the last line.
How many times when they've sparred has he told her she leaves her right side unprotected?
Aww, I love that R gives K advice and stuffs when they're sparring. He is so protective of her. <333
Before looking at her wound, he holds her gaze, quiet and calm. She can see in his eyes the silent admonition, and while he hasn't said a word, she still feels her cheeks burn with shame.
THAT IS SO RICHARD. I love that he didn't actually say anything to scold her, but that it was there in his eyes. And that just the way he looks at her is enough for K to get that he was disappointed she lied about the wound.
His jaw clenches, trying to hide an emotion she thinks might be pain.
Love that he's in pain at the thought of causing her pain.
His hand lingering on her skin a moment longer than needed; thumb rubbing in small circles. She watches as his eyes travel up her thigh until he remembers ( ... )
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And I'm glad the no words till the end worked, it is only because of my inability to write dialogue! LOL
SHE DOES LEAVE HER RIGHT SIDE UNPROTECTED! I would hope he tells her that LOL
and OHhh I'm so glad you think it is in character and can see it on the show! WIN! ty
I maybe am smiling a whole ton at this comment :DD
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FINE JO LIKED IT WHEN WE ALL SAID IT SO
MINE
i'll sparkley it later
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she uses the excuse of taking a bath to check the damage.
OMG NAKED K IN THE BATH!! ALREADY SO MIUCH WIIIIIN!!
This she is used to: men kneeling at her feet, yet having the Seeker there makes her uneasy.
ooohhh LOVES THIS LINE!!!<33333
his warm hand holding her thigh steady as he stitches, his body tucked between her legs where she's only imagined him before.
THIS THIS THIS!!! Love her thinking about him to take away pain. It's so pretty!!! AND the fact that she's imagining him between her legs. heeeee <33333333
His hand lingering on her skin a moment longer than needed; thumb rubbing in small circles.
He THINKS ABOUT BEING THERE TOO!!
A small smirk tugs the corner of his mouth shaking his head as he turns back to camp
“You really are very bad at lying."
LAST LINE LAST LINE LAST LINE!!
I GET TO YELL IT AT YOU NOW!!!! HEEEEE
I LOOOOOOOOVE THIS BB YOU NEED TO WRITE MOAR!!! YOU ARE VERY GOOD. VERY VERY GOOD!!
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She THOUGHT taking a bath would stop him but NOOooo :P
I LOVE THAT YOU LOVE THAT LINE TOO!!!
YES she needs the distracting and R is veryVERY good for the distracting!!
AND THEY ARE MUTUAL THINKERS!
Hahah YAY last line took me long enough I'm glad it is good :D
This is all very weird being on this side of comments...
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I love this bit: This she is used to: men kneeling at her feet, yet having the Seeker there makes her uneasy.
and this: Her head swims and she tries to concentrate on other things: his warm hand holding her thigh steady as he stitches, his body tucked between her legs where she's only imagined him before.
Lovely little fic!!
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Such a nice comment YAY tyty. :)
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<3
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