Fic: "Smoke and Mirrors" (Bob/Ray, NC-17)

[valmontheights]

Title : Smoke and Mirrors
Author : Arlyn Jayde (atomichatred82E-mail : atomichatred82@lycos.com

Comments

[nova_bright]

This is absolutely beautiful. Oh wow!

The porn part was achingly hot, but oddly (for me at least) my favourite part was Ray taking photos of the smoke, the descriptions of his thought processes.

This is so, so good!

Thank you for writing it! :D

[valmontheights]

Heh, I'm an amateur photographer myself, and believe me, holding a camera worth two months' salary for the first time and hoping you can actually take pictures worth looking at? DAUNTING.

And thanks! :D

[kevlarhearts]

HOT!!!!

[valmontheights]

THANKS!

[evil_authoress]

Wow, nothing like a bit of stupid boy banter mixed in with some porn for a great fic experience. Well done! (PS: ever considered posting to plainlovely, a comm just for Ray/Bob and all its wonderment? :D)

[valmontheights]

I really should, shouldn't I? :D

[7iris]

Very hot, and I really liked the use of photography, and what Ray and Bob's relationships with cameras say about their relationship with each other.

[valmontheights]

Thank you very much! Photography is a not-so-sekrit kink of mine, and every since finding out that Ray's a photographer himself I've been itching to write something like this.

[secrethappiness]

Wow, that was hot and it really showed the intimacy between them without shoving it in the reader's face.

[valmontheights]

Glad you liked!