Fic: "Smoke and Mirrors" (Bob/Ray, NC-17)

[valmontheights]

Title : Smoke and Mirrors
Author : Arlyn Jayde (atomichatred82E-mail : atomichatred82@lycos.com

Comments

[nahemaraxe]

Oh wow. I'm not that much of a porn girl [well, not anymore, haha], but this had me won and conquered the same.

I demand more. :D

[valmontheights]

hahaha...i should point out:

Your icon?

the events of this story take place the very same day that picture was taken. :D

[chemical_stripe]

This was so sexy and incredibily brilliant. I love your descriptions and details. Wonderful job!!

[valmontheights]

Thanks! Glad you like it.

[keepingtime_ca]

Awesome story! And I'll second everyone else regarding the 'oh baby' when it comes to cameras and photos and all of that.
I thought you did a great job with the transition between the first two days - following the line about the rain not letting up anytime soon. Great job of showing how time passed, and keeping with the rain motif throughout.
Can't wait for more Bob/Ray!

[valmontheights]

Thanks! I've been aching for more photography-related fics as of late, so I thought the best way to do that would be to write my own. :D

[valmontheights]

The flood kept me out of the office on Feb 1st, leaving me to recuperate from post-concert fatigue and bask in the afterglow of seeing MCR live. :D

How could I not honor that occasion?

[r1cepudding]

Oh my God, how did you even write this, you're amazing. NNNNNNGH BOB/RAY, I LOVE IT. Your Bob in particular makes me do cartwheels while heartclutching - it takes some coordination, but it's the reaction you inspire. <333333333333333

[valmontheights]

cartwheels while heartclutching

THAT IS AN INCREDIBLE FEAT OF COORDINATION. RIGHT UP THERE WITH TAKING DSLR PICTURES WHILE DEEP-DICKING, PERHAPS.

THANK YOU SO MUCH!