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blue_by_you April 16 2015, 04:57:40 UTC
I love this.

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vaneramos April 16 2015, 13:54:05 UTC
Thank you!

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poem NaPoWriMo day 15 anonymous April 16 2015, 13:23:37 UTC
Wonderful!

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Re: poem NaPoWriMo day 15 vaneramos April 16 2015, 13:54:37 UTC
Thank you.

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anonymous April 16 2015, 13:27:18 UTC
Love this poem. I like to imagine you playing with the words, words that you chose beforehand and then arranged and rearranged and could go back to. The fridge metaphors work well. Good job.From Maz at gramswisewords.blogspot.com

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vaneramos April 16 2015, 13:53:14 UTC
Thank you, Maz. Your imagination is accurate. When writing magnetic poetry I typically graze the words, picking those that speak to me in the moment, rather than having any particular image or idea in my head. Then it becomes a puzzle. This one started differently. Due to the prompt, I wanted to address the refrigerator, a word I don't recall having used before.

I like using restraints/limitations when I write. The fridge magnets limit my vocabulary. I like how this makes me focus on their look, sound and individual meaning, forcing me to set aside the usual abstractions and complex ideas -- which can be useful, but can also hobble creativity.

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Congrats on being featured. anonymous April 16 2015, 13:33:20 UTC
Great job taking a creative approach to the prompt!

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Re: Congrats on being featured. vaneramos April 16 2015, 13:45:45 UTC
Wow, thank you!

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awesome! ext_3116865 April 21 2015, 09:16:45 UTC
I love your post! This is such a clever use of the prompt. And now I really want to go get one of those kits. Congrats on being the featured artist for day 16!

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Re: awesome! vaneramos April 21 2015, 12:27:14 UTC
Thanks so much. Magnetic poetry is a lot of fun.

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