Recompose (FFVIII [G])

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Title: Recompose
Fandom: Final Fantasy VIII
Rating: G
Characters: Ultimecia
Summary: And the world, it spins around you, turns a corner. I am God.

Comments

[siva630]

Here via ff_press.

Wow! This is heavy stuff, very beautifully written - your expression and language is unique; not a single phrase here sound heard-before. I like that!

You lend a very sympathetic light to Ultimecia, whilst at the same time keeping her shrouded in darkness & mystery. I like the way you presented the dilemma of choice & time & destiny, and explaining in a way how Ultimecia came to be what she is.

I really enjoyed it. :D

[heybitchmove]

Ahhhh, I love Ultimecia. It's a shame so many fanfiction writers completely ignore her, because she makes for some very interesting character analysis.

This is just beautiful. I like that you tackled her characterization from a first-person perspective; that's so rarely done with Ulti and you pulled it off wonderfully. I especially enjoyed how everything came together at the end. And the writing itself, fantastic. You've managed to say so much in such a small space.

[auronlu]

Beautiful, restless, cryptic, as it should be.

It's so hard to write well the mind of those uber-villains and beyond-human characters that modern mythology like Final Fantasy dares to portray.

[purplekitte]

I'm always willing to jump to find anything about Ultimecia. That was lovely. I liked the ideas of choice and the future you were using.