Atlantis Koan

Feb 08, 2010 21:36

            “I think maybe there’s something wrong with Sheppard.”

The fact that he had implicated Colonel Sheppard rather than himself and the deadly serious, ‘the Wraith could attack at any moment’ tone that made Dr. Keller look up from her research and stare at Dr. McKay.

“And what would suggest that, Rodney,” she ( Read more... )

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kriadydragon February 9 2010, 05:11:20 UTC
Hee. Cute :D

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vecturist February 10 2010, 04:41:55 UTC
Thanks! I love Shep/'Lantis stories.

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parisindy February 9 2010, 06:57:47 UTC
awwwwww
well done
thanks for the story!

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vecturist February 10 2010, 04:42:28 UTC
Thank you! This was an interesting story to try and write.

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parisindy February 10 2010, 05:22:01 UTC
well i hope you write more

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sherry57 February 9 2010, 07:48:36 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I love how you've even included Torren in the team comfort. Nice one!

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vecturist February 10 2010, 04:45:08 UTC
Thank you - love the look Shep/Joe gives Torren at the end of 'Prodigal.'

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titan5 February 9 2010, 13:53:47 UTC
I love a zoned out John fixing things and Atlantis kind of borrowing him was neat. Also loved his team trying to keep up and Rodney trying to figure out what he was doing. Security teams having to chase John down makes me laugh!!

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vecturist February 10 2010, 04:47:14 UTC
Thanks - love Shep/Atlantis stories, especially when the city is trying to be helpful, although not always clear about her intent. I may be a Shep whumper, but writing McKay is fun since I can sometimes relate as a scientist and a teacher!

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coolbreeze1 February 9 2010, 20:39:02 UTC
Hehe! Poor John, at the mercy of Atlantis whenever she wants him to do something. Enjoyed this!

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vecturist February 10 2010, 04:49:36 UTC
Thanks you - I love Shep/Atlantis stories when the city is trying to help in a somewhat misguided way. Part of the inspiration was a dream I had of the city commandeering the ATA carriers and Shep doing penance.

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