FIC: Monkey's Paw Love Song (3/6)

[ven_brandybuck]

Title: Monkey's Paw Love Song (3/6)
Author: vensre
Starring: Dom/Billy
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The way I can imagine is not the true Way.
Notes: Beta by ali_jayne. For Puella. { 1 ~ 2 }

Comments

[nakannalee]

Still really loving this. Especially like how you did the bike crash scene--very straightforward and vivid, and it was perfect to end on Viggo's dialogue.

And yay for the word "kismet." It's just one of those that you find buried in the thesaurus and think WHY hasn't it been used more often? (But alas, such are the thoughts of an English major!)

Very much looking forward to more!

[vensre]

Concrete feedback is better than chocolate. ♥ Much appreciated.

I have very poor luck with bicycles. I'm afraid I took it out on Dom a little, although it'd be more true to my own experience if he'd landed right on his face.

[babydazzle]

[vensre]

Thanks!

::squeezes you to see if you squee::

XD

[babydazzle]

[vensre]

Don't mind at all. Friended you back.

Hee! J/G is what I do. Anchor's mine.

[vensre]

Yay!

::sits on you:: ♥

[ex_rogerpit]

Hmm...is touch the ONLY power Dom has, or could there be something more?

[vensre]

You'll know in chapter four. :D

Thanks again for reading.

[navelremark]

i feel like i know where this is going... =) maybe for a few reasons.

<3

[vensre]

I wonder why. Could it be that you remember the concept drabbles I wrote, a long time ago in a galaxy far far away?

::that ridiculous open-mouthed smile::

You look like a happy savage in that icon.