FIC: Monkey's Paw Love Song (4/6)

[ven_brandybuck]

Title: Monkey's Paw Love Song (4/6)
Author: vensre
Starring: Dom/Billy
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The way I can imagine is not the true Way.
Notes: Beta by ali_jayne. For Puella. { 1 ~ 2 ~ 3 }

Comments

[ex_rogerpit]

Hmm...so Billy has his own powers. Telekinesis would be my guess - being able to move things (including air currents, evidently) with his mind.

[vensre]

Too bad for Dom this isn't a universe like in X-Men, where mutations are widely known even if not widely accepted. He thought he was the only one.

[ex_rogerpit]

Too bad this is only six parts. It would be interesting to explore how Billy and Dom first discovered their abilities, and if there are others like them (almost like the TV show "Heroes").

[vensre]

I'm afraid a story detailing Dom's early life with his powers would be too angsty for me. He wasn't having a good time with it. It'd be fun to look at Billy's, though.

Six parts and an epilogue, to be exact. But sequels are possible. :D

[msilverstar]

Oh yes. What a relief, just wow. You did a great job of ratcheting up the tension and now it's going to be OK (we readers hope, at least) and yay!

[vensre]

::beams::

Well, Dom hasn't cleared all his hangups, but I'm a happy ending sort of person.

Thanks so much for taking the time to give feedback. I really appreciate it.

[light_the_sky76]

Squee! *claps hands*

[vensre]

::swings you around::

XD

[daydreambeleevr]

*squee*

billy!powers!!!!!!!

:beams: do i get a cookie for figuring that out early??? maybe if I bat my eyes???

*grin*

I love the idea of them watching X-MEN. very funny.

kerry =)

[vensre]

You absolutely get a cookie! You were right on, you clever thing. ♥

::scoops you up and squishes fondly::

[escapist_art]

Wow. It's very interesting.

[vensre]

Thanks! Glad I could entertain.